Talk:A Certain Universal Principle - Brave New World - Part 0 JumpStart/@comment-25113070-20140702090726/@comment-25113070-20140702185138

Cheers for the offer

would be nice for another pair of eyes to help proof read over as i post it, i will leave the main editing to myself still at the moment as i am changing parts around rapidly at times and adding a lot of story constantly.

it would be nice to know how to keep the formatting of newlines without having to do it manually and everything ending double spaced, its a pain to go throught it all and break it apart again once coppied over to the wiki.

it is far easier to read in my original compared to above, it is in blocks still but seerated into easier to read lines.