Board Thread:Fan-made Monsters/@comment-26517142-20160903222934/@comment-27013478-20160904202335

'Family: Succubus

Type: Demon

Habitat: Caverns, sheltered places by Demon Realms (big enough to hosts hundreds of Mamono underlings)

Dispostion: Bold, sadistic, domineering, lustful

Diet: Spiritual Energy'

Straight forward info, bold sadistic, domineering, lustful. I need my meme cape for this shit... Fuck, Zalgo memes are not good for this one, they're pretty much all the same. Or...

'An unnatural Demon specie created by pure malice,'

So, they were made out of someone's time of the month or?

' it was made to command Ozian armies before they were thrown into exile.'

So they're generals, that might be problematic.

'hey are a specie that reign proverbially as 'queens of the Naether' since they have a knack of creating kingdoms of their own, using these to their advantage as means of gaining resource, protection - and men.'

So, trying to slay one would be considered regicide...hmm.

'Zalgones mostly stand at 7-8 feet - nearly in comparison to the Ex-Giant species.'

Ahem, lemme quote the Doomguy. YOU ARE GIANT, AND YOU HAVE GIANT GUTS.

'Their sleek skin are crimson in color, bared as they wear little clothing to cover themselves.'

Exhibitionism potential much?

'Horns sprouting on their heads are curved in similarity to Weresheeps and Satyros', along with lethal barbed tails they sport as a prehensile limb.'

Note #1, watch out for the tail. As if the manticores didn't teach me anything.

'A single Zalgone is always born in every generation. Mother Zalgones usually tend to their children until they reach an age they can fend for themselves -and disappear from their side. Now alone, the Zalgone fills her void of loneliness by gathering lackeys.'

So, you feel the void of emptiness...by gathering an army. I can relate to that.

' This is done by a form of contract known as the Mark : a seal of servitude formed by the Naether magic known as 'The Word', granted on those the Mamono deem worthy as pawns. Once the chosen monster gains the seal, she will be loyal to her and only her. Sometimes, human women are chosen, although this occurence is rare.'

Note #2, avoid the Mark at all costs. This shit is good for breaking troops of the female, kind.

'This unique manner of gaining followers is one of the main reasons why Zalgones were found dangerous. Left unchecked, they began to form specialized legions on their own accord, threatening to overturn the tyrant Circe.'

And take her place. I mean c'mon, it totally completes the sentence.

' The despot only did what was natural to eliminate their plot of rebellion - throw them deep into the underrealm.'

Throw them in the underrealm instead of annihilating them. Good idea Circe, good idea.

'. Little did she realize that the Demons became more powerful below Oz, thereby gaining an intense hatred for the world above. '

Oh gee, who would've thought about that.

'From the safety of their cavern domains, Zalgones send their Mamono goons out into the Naether wastes to find men.'

Note #3 Watch out for the grunts.

' They prefer males who are weaker than them (but men who are especially strong in spirit and mind are a bonus), and in the event of finding one, the followers drag the hapless victim to the main 'hive'.'

Welp, to drag someone to the main hive, they have to catch them, to which I say.

"RUN, RUN, AS FAST AS YOU CAN! YOU CAN'T CATCH ME! I'M THE FUCKING GINGERBREAD MAN! HAHAAHHAHAHAH"

' It was observed not to flee in panic upon entering Zalgone domain. Not with the hundreds of Zalgone-controlled Mamonos that it hosts within ready to assault any intruder as a massive, sexually-starved horde.'

Sheesh, gotta do it like in World War Z. Get to the choppa'

'The followers will waste no time in presenting any male prize to the Zalgone queen, who initially rubs herself on him to gauge his SE.'

>inb4 Humping.

'If he won't pass her standards, he would be left at the mercy of the Zalgone lackeys.'

>inb4 Pelvis breaking.

'Otherwise, the Zalgone leaves a form of the Mark on him as an imprint only he and the Demon can see.'

That's...neat I guess? I'm really trying to make something funny out of something that would most likely traumatize someone.

'Even if he runs, the sign acts as a tracking device. He'll be hunted down and dragged bck to the hive, no matter where in the Naether he would hide.'

>Gingerbread man quote goes here.

'To the Zalgone, the Mark is the sign of the man's fealty - a contract of service wherein his loyalty is absolute. As the man peels away from her, moving farther and farther away, the Mark will burn and itch, and claw away at his thoughts.'

Note #4 Try to see if amputation or removal of affected area works for getting rid of it.

'The man will begin to hear her voice inside his head saying' You are mine. Return to me. ' And like a magnet, he will be drawn back to her, anticipating her with lust in his eyes. '

Hmmm, how could that be fought against.

" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tl1yv-e91Q4 "

Nuff' said.

'. If another woman or Mamono were to come close to him, the Mark will 'spread the Word' via touch, and in no time she will be the Zalgone's minion and an advocate of her teachings. Any other female who comes close to her will experience a similar fate.'

Well shit, again, this is hard to combat, if you can combat it at all.

'The man will be the Zalgone's sexual slave for life. He will be a servant to her whims, fulfilling her desire to copulate and feed on his SE. The man will have no choice.'

Well shit, reminds me of marriage in Chinese tales. Pretty fucked up and sad if you think about it.

'He will only feel the burning intensity of the Mark hinder through the covenant of sex, else it'll gnaw away at his sentience. The Zalgone, using this to her advantage, will whittle away at his weak impression, making him do all sorts of lasciviousness. She will bury his penis in her vagina with pleasure noises leaving her lips. In the end, he will become her body of sin. One that no one can steal away from her.'

>No one. That means immortality, Yay! Although, that means you're stuck like that forever... Fuck.

'Their demeanor never changes even though they end up as wives. However, they are fierce mothers and will protect their offspring, unborn or born, with their lives. Once their children reach the state of maturity, they leave them to their own devices, but are in fact, monitoring them from afar.'

Neat, I guess.

'Zalgones are not usually fighters. But anger one, and they will grow up to the size of a three-storey building.This enraged state allows them to reinforce their manipulation over the Mark more violently, to a point her pawns will move like ants, blind without her direction.'

Rex Duodecidem Angelus time? Rex Duodecidem Angelus time.

All in all, this one is pretty cool, I guess. Pretty good, but not for me I guess.

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