User blog comment:Notadeadguy/Lucky 7's: Episode 1- Of Otakus, Mamono, and a Beam Katana/@comment-25720867-20150316070509

De story. It ain't charming me.

I would have chosen a mercenary or a traveler already part of that world to be the protagonist. And then would make it so that he ends up meeting whoever you want him to meet.

Whilist a person falling out of the sky isn't a terrible idea, the part where he is sucked into the book is terrible. Especially since he already knows shit about the whorld he visited.