User blog comment:Flamebiplane/Thunder Dome/@comment-39280634-20200302165514

Good story and fun action scenes, I liked it. The whole thing with the Matriarchy and the constructs got me hooked. My biggest confusion though is how does a Raiju got Antman powers. I do have some questions but I'd like to read into some of the other stuff before I ask them.

I am a little stumped though, seeing as you already have two Hellhound characters because I was working on one of my own too. And I'm not sure how go with it (I wanted a rather tall and buff one but you already have Rix's mother). A Hellhound that's rather feral due to all the hunting she has suffered... because she's a Hellhound. And kinda hates herself for that reason. At least, that's the premise I'm going for. What suggestions do you got, if any ?