Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-37790990-20200423225743

Im making a harem of slighty extremist monstergirls who excel at turning places into demonrealms by manipulating the enviroment and bussines in the land. Theyre not as extreme as lescatie with the raping and all but are more into faning the flames of desire. I would like some feedback on some characters and story parts that im stuck on.The characters are as followed:

The husband botanist/ecologist who likes to help his wives in theyre plans as the backbone with his ecological knowledge and also helps in thinking of the fastest way to mess with the enviroment for maximum demonrealm conversion speed.

A bicorn very sweet, gentle and graceful personality. Good at tempting people into falling. The kind of girl that suptly nudges you towards temtation rather than outright raping like a succubus. Shes your tipical lovely house wife who the neighbors all find charismatic and nice.

A demon obviously the leader of all the extremist stuff. She makes the plans to make the land a lewder and happier place for all of them. Has a very bussines woman personality sort of like a tanuki which is where she got the idea of bussines from.

A darkmage, their profile says theyre not above changing lands into demonrealms if its for theyre own benefit so i thought it fitting that a wife with magical knowhow and spells and potions to turn the land even lewder would be a welcome adition. She used to be a human sorceress infatuated with the man and the other wives got her to put on an essece siphoning pleasure rune with the excuse to better her magic but theyre were more interested in turning her into a monster.

Now here is where i need alot of feedback i wanted another wife to be more oriented towards terraforming the land like a dark gnome or a dark matter.

On the one hand the gnome would be better story wise because i thought that it could tie in with the dark mage by her being an elementalist and her gnome getting turned dark by the girls and therefore have a role in turning her master into a darkmage with the rune too. Plus i like the world guides info about demon realm earth slowly corrupting humans by corrupting the crops they eat and the general land. Slow corruption is what im going for if you havent noticed.

But on the other hand darkmatters explicitly are suns of darkness and are aces at making demonrealms plus can turn women into sucuubi.

Thoughts? Which do you think would be better gnome or darkmatter?

Also i thought about adding another girl but not sure what mamono to add. Thought about adding a tentacle mamono because you know harem and tentacles would be great so no one feels left out plus i could see the tentacle darkmage and demon working together to find a way to turn a town into a tentacle forest in a day to corrupt the town really fast. Ive been told about a danuki but the demon is already the bussines savy lawyer with contracts so shed be kinda irrelevant. Another one ive been told is an apophis cause they are plenty extremist but the setting isnt really in a dessert so not sure if it would work. Ps sorry for any spelling errors english isnt my best language

Any feedback is apretiated! 