Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-37028137-20200929235744

Greetings Lance,

1 Mm that colder attitude was fun to write for a change. I've got a Chapter idea with him in it. (More on that later)

2 Yeah I think he's the sort that could tear a bad guy apart during a fight but apologize in a very genteel manner for overwatering the neighbour's begonias he was caring for, while they were on holiday.

3 In a way yes I suppose it is, nice catch there.

4 The Cybermen (Especially the classic 60s and 70s versions) are some of my favourite Doctor Who villians. The Seraphim was a great coincidence of inspiration and gives me leeway to create stories with a clandestine organization. You may indeed see the Sontarans at some point.

5 Mm listen to the audio books sometime they have some freaky alien threats and some fantastic ideas.

6 I had a bit of a mull over this I think I'll change it a bit. Oh as for the end lacking punch I have a plan in motion where Vels actually sees each of Nick's Regenerations and sees how he dies each time later in the story. So I'll post them to see how they rate once they're complete.

As always thank you so much for looking this over. If you don't mind I'm going to tweak the Regen slightly and I'll post it to see how it comes across.

By the way since I'm here I had more of a think over your characters and how I would like to use them in a future chapter. But I'd like you're thoughts first. (It's going to be a few chapters from now but I figured I'd start the process.) Are there any must haves in the chapter, places, people, common areas that sort a thing?

Figured I'd start with the basics, anyways thanks again for the help.

Cheers,

The Weary TimeLord.