Talk:Karakasa-Obake/@comment-24169511-20140714033305/@comment-25113070-20140714082659

The original is very engrish and poorly written with a lot of unnecessary fluff, it would be better being re interpreted than using a literal translation.

It does not flow as native English, it reads more like a compounded list. I tried to keep reasonably close to the original while improving the flow when i rewrote it.