Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-34263048-20181201061225/@comment-35133814-20181201193007

Yes english is my mother tongue. Theres most definitely some grammar errors. Writing for stories isn't really within my forte considering most of the writing I've ever done has been academic. so dialogue is something I need to work on. You are also correct on the matter of my over-reliance on the word and.

If I'm being completely honest I also don't care as wrote that before I went to sleep. Not to mention I had just finished writing a 19 page paper that took forever write,edit and source(citations and whatnot). I do appreciate the constructive criticism though, even if I disagree with you on the length of my sentences.lol

LorialetDreamer once again thank you for the criticism, and remember don't send your kids to Public Schools.