Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-39280634-20200526163333

Okay, interesting changes there. First you changed his hair from dark to brown (the grey-ish endings are a nice touch). I also see his uniform change (if I'm right, that's the captain uniform).

And it's surprising to see his in depth story in the Star Trek universe. And yeah, I see you were very detailed with the dates and names; as someone who also used to watch Star Trek, it's pretty well made (although I'm not much versed beyond New Generation and Deep Space Nine; and I only watched those quite some time ago).

However, what really got my attention were the thing about the 'temporal agents' and the 'removal from timelines'. How did he caused the paradoxes ? I'm kinda lost on those causes.