User blog comment:Tarrion1/Tarrion1-Shots/Teachings of a Teacher/@comment-30895326-20170321165349

This was a very nice story and I think you portrayed the Hakutaku just fine.

Don't worry about following the profiles word-for-word. Treat them more of a guideline than a rule.

There were soome grammer hiccups, but nothing too worth noting. Re-reading your story is always a good thing to do, unless you already do it.

Also, I don't know if it's just me but the words are HUGE and seemingly in bold. It's not a major problem, but just be careful for futurre writing.