User blog comment:Sp1ku/Contest Entree/@comment-82.4.97.89-20160208155633

Mate please I can understand if your between 16 - 18 or if its your first fiction but your school/college should have at least taught you how to write and do paragraphs. Every 4 or 5 lines of text press enter twice so it seperates it so its just not a long gobbled text.