Thread:Mauller/@comment-28718853-20161119231932/@comment-25113070-20161121144101

thats fine hakaishin, i summed it up above, you can say how hits connected etc, maybe a broken bone or arm etc, but nothing along the lines of gore, like bone piercing skin etc.

like 'He took a bone shattering punch to the arm, But he grit his teeth and bared the pain, his arm now useless and limp at his side.' or something along those lines.

it becomes Gratuitous when you explain lots of gory details and take the battle beyond a fight by turning into torture etc.