User blog comment:DarkTreeant/The 18 Inch Curse: Prologue/@comment-33574379-20150119054452/@comment-25808351-20150120063215

That's tough. Yours is a story of two lovers who spend time apart and develope into stronger people. Personally, my OC's are already established warriors, so there isn't much to develop.

Sten, I want to see him train and master being an assassin as well as his powers. What his training or what hardships he faces, up to you. As for Naomi, maybe she goes on her own journey or she stays at the farm and takes care of Sten's father, maybe when Sten returns his fathers a changed man thanks to Naomi kickin him into shape.