User blog comment:Ikoter/Seeing Red/@comment-25319939-20150128211548

Great read, really enjoyable.

Although I might be abit biased xD The plot and the writing was solid.

You even gave me some ideas for details when im doing part 3 and 4.

Also I feel honored that you liked my oc enough that you wrote a fic about her, thank you.

My only criticism is that sometimes i had a hard time to understand who was talking.

Other than that, I only have thumbs up.