User blog comment:SilentRanger/Monster Girl Roleplay/@comment-12.249.147.238-20140409180253/@comment-12.249.17.26-20140624230831

lock drew his blade unluckily he dropped his favorite poison from his bag. he swiftly placed his blade into the first of the soldiers within reach. the other soldier drew his blade but was clearly blind  as a loud scream  pierced the air lock swiftly walked out of the room using his hilt to swiftly knock out the remaining man. he heard a loud bang and a gurgled scream lock drew his his favorite blade and rushed through the door to find the origins of the bang the strange weapon was facing a small girl ( jinko) lock thew the blade into the gunmans head running for the girl he noticed the mother as she let ot another scream this one gurgled

her neck was pouring blood her trachea completely removed by the gun shot and he saw a second gunman and a  swords man lock took  his chance he immediately lifted the sheet to blind the child from his next moves he threw his blade into the gunmans wrist and charge the swords man who swung poorly at lock still nicking his throat lock shoved his blade threw the swordsmans throat  pinning him to a small wardrobe his body hung limply. the gunman began raising his gun lock kicked his wrist thusting the blade deeper and elbowed the man knocking him out

lock noticed the girl had seen him kill the two men. the sheets heavy with her mothers blood had fallen far faster then he had hoped he immeadiatly went to care fo her mother clearly fading away he graba small too ant placed it into her air way the to prvent blood from filling her lung  the mother pushed me away  i turned to see anothe gun man entering the room

this one dilerious aimed at the girl. lock rushed him taking him down with a single leg he immeadiatly broke the gunmans arm and pulled the other from the socket looking back at the mother she had faded the leaking from her carotid artery stopped  lock grabed the child and pulled out a meat hook from his belt and facing the girl in the opposite direction hooked the man laying on the ground with broken limb through the jaw used it and dragged him out of the room face down to allow the blood to drain from his mouth looking for mara he left the room

he distracted the girl by talking he began " whats your name? "

ive still been rolling but i felt the story flowed btter without me placing every roll on the page if thats fine with you guys