User blog comment:Notadeadguy/A brilliant idea that I wish to share to you all:/@comment-25720867-20150226053702/@comment-25720867-20150227064950

Because your idea of a fanfic is rather unrealistic.

Its like you shitted an idea, put it on a plate, and served it to us.

A writer is like a cook! The stories he writes are the food his clients eat.

If the story is shit or has such an unrealistic concept, it will be just like eating sausages with pie that's been peed on.

The only way I'm gonna read this is if you fix the plot. An otaku? Really? Fucking really?

This was a critique.