User blog comment:ArmInAss/Ivan Grozny (Prologue)/@comment-23603505-20150317220021

Beautiful, this is very good, aside from some tense issues is and was, I enjoyed the story immensely, though I think the story could have been just fine with Ivan's point of view because switching character POV in a chapter irriate me for some reason, yet I love the story it was detailed, humors and heartfelt. And I can see the family relationship  without it going over the top.

Kayta however you should have described her a little even if you use the picture in the encyclopidia still would have been nice to see some of her features