Thread:Rexir2/@comment-24664052-20151109061418/@comment-24664052-20151111062057

(I just want to see if you can word it better than what have I written, besides we can run multiple RPs, since we can take time before responding)

“Let them in.” 

“Excuse us, young lord?” 

''“Let them in!” The young lord’s voice came as a surprise to them. Nevertheless, they complied with the order. ''

''That was the last scene she had seen before she blacked out in the arms of the maid who tried to bring her in. ''

That was what she could remember before she lost consciousness.

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She could feel warmth enveloping her whole body, returning her life. Her body felt the best she ever had. She could feel herself laying in a soft surface…a bed way even larger, softer and more comfortable than the one she used to have…

…but nevertheless, when her parents were still alive, she was happier and content with a simple life. Now that they have been dead, she strove to find any of her father’s relatives, she remembered having met them when her father married her mother, if they are to be of help. She vaguely remembered that her aunt was working as a cook for the royal family in Kiev, the capital of Rossiya.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Helvetica","sans-serif";mso-fareast-font-family:"TimesNewRoman"">Even if Kiev is far from their little home in the mountains, she braved on the trek for months, only to arrive at her goal severely weakened and sick. It is only out of pure luck that she was found by one of those who used to work in the castle, and she could remember her being shooed off by the castle guards, to go bring her to a nearest hospital instead. And then he came, the young master of the castle, and let them in and be given proper treatment and accommodations.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Helvetica","sans-serif";mso-fareast-font-family:"TimesNewRoman"">And that’s the extent of her latest memory. Now she could feel her consciousness regain. Her senses are beginning to work again, and are detecting the presence of someone familiar.