Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-35836714-20190527194644/@comment-35836714-20190528194641

HeartOfLordNumidium i read your story and i have to say that is quiet good and entertaining.

The was only one thing i noticed while reading, which confused me a little.

It was sometimes hard to follow from whose perspective you told the story. (Sometimes your OC, sometimes the little crow tengu etc.) So you should either stick with one side or make it easier for the reader by putting in some visual clue when switching perspective.