Talk:Hellhound/@comment-30458770-20161115230825/@comment-30061283-20161116012157

You need to improve your grammar.Its not even a sentence because theres no punctuation.Just one run on,uncaptilized...thing.From what im getting its talking about a weak and shy Hellhound whos searching for a husband because other Hellhounds occasionally beat the ever living shit out of her(Exaggeration).She comes across you and she dosent know how to react.Bullshark I dont mean to be rude but you have to improve this if anyone else is going to read it.