User blog comment:Samuel Cheshire/Samuel's Folly (Lamia)/@comment-216.58.48.26-20150910200920/@comment-130.217.199.238-20150910220744

Thanks. :) I like to think that a good story is as much about the people in it as much as what is happening to them. A plain MC is easy to project yourself onto and you can ignore a few of the things they do or decide, but an interesting character should be interesting to watch on their own. Or at least that's what I like to think. XP

Right, looking back on it now I can see the problem with tenses. Almost cringeworthy in fact. >.< I'll have to watch the parenthesis, I often use them to express an afterthought or something that may seem awkward. I'll go back and fix these later. XP

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the feedback! :D