User blog comment:Breakaway Republic/Unfaithful/@comment-24942455-20160113103558

I remember this discussion.

Not a bad job putting the tear-jerker spin on this. But then again, it is your writing, so a quality job is to be expected. Doesn't help that I hate cheating scenarios on principle (they can make for decent stories, but hell if they don't turn my stomach something fierce).

Great job!