Thread:Breakaway Republic/@comment-24664052-20160601010001/@comment-26948101-20160615022826

Line 51 and 53- Pants and Trousers are the same thing. Pretty sure you mean underwear.

Line 73- I probably would go with another word besides 'spectating'.

Also, I get the feeling the MC let his tormentor off the hook too easily, but you also made it clear that he didn't come to that decision lightly.