User blog comment:NightmareAura/Late Getting Home- A Hellhound One-Shot/@comment-31122347-20170216031441

This is very well written.

In most Mamono stories, the author often leaves character development and attachement (no matter how fleeting it must be in a short story) as an after thought.

This is not the case with you, there are wonderful glimpses into the characters you've made here making your characters realistic, and I like the back and forth interaction.

Very nice.