User blog comment:MockingJester/Shelter for the mute/@comment-32042142-20181114182410/@comment-30014014-20181114190054

First, I hope you didn't hit yourself on that wall of text people keep bumpiing in for some reason. Other than that, glad you found it fun to read.

Second. Maybe I should had mentionned that prick basically had left her out for a while out here. Between the extreme heat and the extreme cold, I thought her having a few days of recovery would be a priority. I tend to forget they are monsters sometimes.

On your second point, let me emphazize on that point your rightfully pointed at: I tend, again, to forget that they are monsters. Instead, I tried going for the whole 'almost rape trauma' that many tend to go through to justify the reluctiveness to such an act just to see what the guy is going to do.

Unfortunately, for the third time, I had forsaken that they recover to a ridiculous speed form these toxic behavior when at the side of a guy who's really much more about their well-being. I tried going for a slow accumulation to this, thus the reason why 450 days before that. Funny thing to note is that my original plan was to have it done at the 150-day mark, but thought it was way too quick to jump the gun.

As for that prick guy whoes getting gangked and gangbanged by two sadistic monsters, I think I shold have emphazize that while he had the struggle won mentally, trying to jump in her pants was a task easier said than done. he basically wanted to break her mentally as to relish in her with no instrinsic resistance. Binding her to something would be conceding defeat, in a twisted way of thinking.

Trust me, it was somewhat different when I started putting it on screen, but I way in the mindset of a woman who happened to have monster attribute and not a monster shaped as a human woman. I apologize for the mishandling of this part. I thought having her jump  the gun so early would somewhat go against the romance line I wanted to showcase.