User blog comment:Drkness231/Mamono One-Shots! Chapter 6: Lamia/@comment-23603505-20150307044014

Why would he use a bomb I mean those weapons are horrible for self defense and not even a hint romantic. But thats fine theres are first time for everything. The story is good a little tenses off her like "The bomb is to go off"

should be Was to go off since its past tense. Though I have to admit first person is not for me I still enjoyed the story.