User blog comment:GorgonBreaker/The Tree of Lust-Introduction/@comment-5426290-20150816112512

[Adrianne’s real name was called during each of them.] Real name?

[“Shame!...Shame!...Shame!”] (0-0) Is that her ringtone?

[it is nice to see that have manners worthy our attentions.] 'that (you) have'

[yet it somehow yet waves of pleasure throughout the college girl's body.] Remove the second 'yet'

[for what's to come, adn what's in store for little ol' me] 'come, (and) what's'

I liked the story, it was a little dark for my taste, but in the end fun nonetheless.