Thread:HoundTheDestroyer93/@comment-25808351-20200826231605/@comment-37028137-20200906180933

Greetings All,

Just as a heads up especially to Flame I will get to the Role Play. I'm just having to overhaul the style of my novel in its entirety so I won't be on pretty much all day.

Basically someone pointed out that my novel isn't actually set up as a novel should be with the character dialouge on a seperate line and whatnot every time a new person speaks. So the character's speech and actions get muddled and hard to figure out. And I wanted to diillusion him of that fact. But I went and had a look at the early chapters and damn it but...the bastard's right it's a quagmire of muddled character dialouge.

And since I actually asked for helpful critiques specifically in my opening author's note, the man is making me eat my words and I feel compelled to fix the issue So I'm going to be putting the whole novel in correct order today and tonight. At 150,000 words it's going to take several hours to put right.

We never did novella writing in primary and by now I'm more used to writing research papers, and patient charts for work! If you couldn't tell I'm venting somewhat because this is a lot of work to do. But the man's criticism was actually well founded so I feel I need to put it right.

Damn, damn, damn damn DAMN

The Weary TimeLord.