Thread:MediocreKnight/@comment-27666783-20200227215226/@comment-39280634-20200229115551

@Knight

(WARNING; NSFW IMAGE)

Well, I thought about this one for quite some time and noticing that everyone came up with whatever uber-powerful characters and threatening organizations, I decided to come up with my own to balance things out.

I noticed how Lilith, for all her efforts for world peace, keeps getting shafted by whatever powerful forces out there, most of them well beyond her league (The Chief God, Pramool/Aleric, Cerberus, Victivius, The Gray Man, The Reptile King and the other Beast Kings, The Archaics and any other ones that I don't know about). There are major forces threatening to ruin the utopia that Lilith worked on hard for so long.

Enter the Black Lotus (working title; not final): a special Radical branch, dedicated to converting or eliminating high level threats with the use of units of Super-Incubi (of sorts), alongside highly trained warrior Mamonos. These Super-Incubi have their powers continualy grown through constant infusions of DE with the help of Dark Matters, Khepris and other Mamono capable of gathering DE, as well as imploying powerful magic and arcane. They are trained to fight all manners of oppositions, including Heroes and even ancient monsters of old (via magical recreation/projection/whatever)

Rather than focus on expanding Demon Realms, they go after high priority targets such crusading Order parties (yes, they out-crusade the crusaders), dangerous beings that remnants of the Old World (that cannot be converted) and any other humans that oppress and/or use Mamonos for their ' petty ways and reasons' (kicking the shit out of crime-lords and the overly-racist).

They continualy research ways to empower their Super-Incubi, in the hopes of being able to bring down even titans. They have the most of unassuming Mamonos and even Incubi as spies and they work mostly in stealth (they don't beat themselves in the chest like all the other Radical factions; they don't even wear their edgy attires and insignias unless they are in combat). Most of the Super-Incubi look and act like typical edgy anime characters, other believe wholeheartedly in Lilith's worldview. And their leader, a mysterious demon-girl of unknow species and power, looks like this: All in a bid to turn the world into the peaceful utopia it should be.

Thoughts ? Opinions ? Is it too edgy or too pretencious ? I mean, I felt like I was stagnating again in my work these last few weeks as well as feeling my motivation dwindling, feeling the same burnout as before I started getting into this so I tried to gather my motivation for something big. Something awesome. And something that I feel strongly about. Please let me know what you think and whatever criticisim you believe I should heed to.