Thread:Proziomix031/@comment-31122347-20170220201349/@comment-31122347-20170307171001

Okay, this is excellent! Do you have any specific notions? It is hard to keep a story under 2,000 words and balance that with proper character development.

I thought he got over it fast too, but I am at a loss as to what other influences he can have. Perhaps make a more "magical" influcnce from Holly and Suna?

Maybe hyptnosis?

Lemme know