Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-32363528-20170714015544/@comment-32042142-20170718181606

Firstly, you can add any element you want since it's your alternative universe, it's up to you to be more or less faithfull of the MGE book.

Also the plot is quite interessing, surprisingly enought, the guy who get transported from our world to the MGE world is not that enought used, and it's surprise me since it's a common idea.

The detail to add the dog with him is really interessing, generally when I imagine a story I try to rationalise the psycological state of my character a maximum, and if somebody would pop out in another world where he is all alone with nobody he know, and most of all, who have specific rules he don't know (magic, ect...) it woukd be extremly hard to bear.

So the main character who have his dog as a support is really interessing since it's the only things he can trust. (I know I think too much but I've didn't expose you half of my theory XD)

I will never understand why people enjoy to see the main character accumulate a harem, I'm absolutely in that kind of things, but it's only my opinion there, apparently this concept is quite popular.

I hope the Order will not be that cliché easy bad guy, seriously, the soldier of the order are good guy(well some of them are probably asshole, there is bad people everywhere), they just think mamono are evil.

The fact monster come back to there former self is quite risky, it can be good, but it's look risky to me.

You should try to write the first chapter at least, you have nothing to lose, it wil be more easy for us to give you our opinion.