Board Thread:Roleplay/@comment-25808351-20170301125240/@comment-25808351-20170310012550

Ahhhhh, the maguffins. Good for a story is used properly. Here is a little lesson on Marcus. In combat, he is confident, assured, un-fucking-wavering. His talent for violence is imbedded in his soul, his very DNA, based upon his heritage. As a dog of war, he is a force to be reckoned with. As a human, he's no more skilled than any man.

Relationship wise, Marcus is a normal guy. He's breed for war not love. Meeting a woman and building a relationship is difficult for him. Doubt can take hold of a man very easily. Marcus is a perfect warrior, not a lover. When he meets a girl he loves, if she's easily into him, he's confident. When faced with a woman like Cyndwella, who has been with a being like Vicky, Marcus will faulter. Marcus loves Cyndwella, but trying to compare with a guy like Vicky is impossible to him.

Can you honestly honestly say that you wouldn't doubt your abilities to make a woman happy, if her previous boyfriend was perfect? Marcus was simply a deer in the headlights when added all the factors. So doubt set in quickly.