Talk:Mantis/@comment-122.108.81.194-20160227091025/@comment-27256584-20160227135734

Decent scenario but there are a few traps you fell into. Don't worry everyone does this.

1. Mamono don't kill. While they are incredibly powerfull and could do so easily, they try to refrain form violence and death as much as possible.

2. This is mainly for the mantis but they appear robotic and emotionless and will rarely speak

3. People will always insert themselves into the situation (that's what these scanarios are for) so try to refrain from having the main character speak as much as possible as people will want to add diologue in thmselves.

Other than that, pretty good, keep at it