User blog comment:Carthois/Rescued Part 2/@comment-1826623-20160317164427

Well...that went from 0->100 real quick. You've got some nice feels coming from this part of the story, especially with the gentle care that Mark showed to the two girls. I'm really curious as to how this will all play out, so I hope it doesn't end any time soon! So far, I'm really favoring Fida as a character, even though I favor cats. You could have gone a bit further in letting the emotions develop towards the end of this part, but it's an excellent read either way. Can't wait to read the next part! ;)