User blog comment:Breakaway Republic/Book Club/@comment-28074295-20160419042204

I quite like how you did your work here. I have one problem though. I do not enjoy manipulative characters. Ming Zhi's blackmail felt more vile than helpful. I could not feel the caring nature of a teacher there or maybe that's just me. That is my only gripe. On the other hand, you really make us sympathize with the MC of the story. It is done so well I thought I was him for a sec. The story pulls me in and intrigues me. I hope to see another part of this.