Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-39280634-20200311174909

Yeah, I remember the advice you gave me: to solve my narration and expository dialogue issues. I'm working on it. I'm also trying to work up back into writing my stuff (trying to finish part 3 of you-know-what).

And while I understand what you said about Nick a little better, I'm sorry if I sound dense but I still have trouble seeing where the loop began (like the "chicken or egg" conundrum). Nick made friends with Vellantha because she knew him before hand, then they make friends again because HE knew her before hand this time and so on, so forth. Where was future Nick when past Nick met future Vellantha ? See what I mean ?