User blog comment:MockingJester/Diary of Dairy/@comment-32042142-20181213182910

I really like the fact you really 'end' the story, it's not just a happy end for the one protagonist, but you really end the story of your setting, and not only of your character.

Just a tiny little incoherence : The new part confirm that they were greatly lacking holstaur's milk, but earlier, when Chelsia made a pizza to Tevin, he emphasize that the cheese taste especially good, implying for the reader that it's made of Holstaur's milk, but considering the time needed to transform milk into cheese, and the fact they are in shortage of it, it seem a bit weird to me. (Or maybe they just import it from somewhere else, I don't know >< )