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I like the idea of her traveling and learning more about Guts, she would learn of the aftermath of his actions. It would an interesting thing that Echidna would actuallu go against the demon lord if it meant protecting her son. Imagine an event where Guts is wounded and is defenseles. The lilim are about convert him but the are stopped when Echidna suddenlly attacks them. To them it would a great shock since all monster always respect and bow down to a lilim. Echidna would basically defy not only what they stand for, but also her own mamono instincts, showing that she doesn't need a husband and with enough will she can beat her mamono nature. The lilim might actaully even try to kill Echidna so she wouldn't spread her defiance that could lead up to revolution. Guts would most likely also seek a seer or some mind healer that could help him understand his nightmares and visions. Him doing it also would only bring limited results and with Much more questions. He would work for almost anyone who can pay, but the reason I think he wouldn't work a order extremist or a mamono extremist is because there is big chance that they won't fullfil their part of the deal. Instead of paying him the order extremist would either try to convert him, or kill him if he refuses. A mamono extremist would again try to convert Guts, if refused, try doing it by extreme force.

Actaully I was going more by the idea that Duruella changes her appearance to warn Guts. Like Guts is about to head into a trap set up by the order and she changes into an old woman to warn Guts of the danger. I imagine Duruella being a schemer, she would most of the time plot in getting Guts for herself, but would at scheme against those that pose danger to him. The rival idea is good. While the lilim wouldn't exactly be enemies as they all share the same goal of converting the world into a demon realm, but they would fight for the right of claiming Guts. He's basically a husband that they are looking for, someone who doesn't bow down to or orgasm just by seeing them. He would be like a rare prize to them and are will to do anything to get him. I can see an event happening where one of them is about to get Guts, only for the other one to interfere and battle it out. Most likely Guts goal would be to prevent demon lord from gaining any power and stop her curroption spreading, and his last goal would be to kill chief goddess because of her this all mess has began. Killing the demon lord would no longer really kill off the mamono as she has spread too much demonic energy for far too long, and her daughter could always simply take her place. He would instead try to draw some borders where the demonix energy could no longer spread and mamono could no longer invade.

Yeah, it would interesting if Guts kept sort of journal of his travels, his experiences and major events. The world he is into simply provides him with new experiences. It would an interesting plot if the chief god notices Guts and his incredible skills and will to resist mamono and she might order heroes to bring in Guts so he could be brainwashed by her to become the ultimate weapon against the demon lord. Some of his adventure would involve reppeling various heroes. Dhampir would make an interesting companion as would travel with Guts to find out what makes him so special. A Kunoichi would at first try to "assassinate" as she was perhaps hired by someone to do it, but after Guts defeats her and spares her life, she would take him interest different than the usual assassination.