Thread:Justheretowrite/@comment-35898511-20191120231253/@comment-36855838-20191128065212

PART 1: Formatting generalities.

The first thing to note is paragraphing, it can be hard to figure out where to break things up, but this is one of the most vital tools in a casual writers arsenal.

Hitting the enter key twice will make a new line, like I just did.

By separating things out like this, we create a mental space and divide our writing into digestible chunks, much like the noticeable screen wipes in the star wars movies.

This brief pause in the flow of content allows readers to automatically understand an idea as finished, and prepare to process a new idea or set of information. For example:

John said, 1 "Hi Jade, how are you today?" 2 Jade glanced at the tacky blue hoodie John was wearing, the matching blue sweatpants, and his friendly, dorky grin, before responding, 3 "Much better, now that you're here to chat with me."

So, what's going on with those spaces? (aside from the fact that I numbered them this time)

Space 1 allows us to stop expecting any more information about what john is doing aside from speaking, and as his dialogue is directed at only one person, we can merely have him name his conversation partner and avoid naming her beforehand, such as by saying "John said to Jade."

Space 2 and space 3 both serve to separate a description of John from the dialogue that the characters are speaking.

Because the first part of this description says that Jade is looking at John, we can get an idea of what she thinks of him and his getup while also finding out what he looks like, this allows our words to carry almost double the meaning, both describing the world the characters inhabit and what they think of their surroundings.

In this way, we can avoid describing things twice and boring our readers, such as by describing attire at one point and then redescribing it in detail all over again when a character sees it.

SEVEN HYPHENS(-) ---

You are a contestant waiting to compete in the game that will commence soon. "Hello everyone watching I'm your lovable host Patrica the harpy and welcome to the Sexually Starved Games! We are here to witness one of the most intense games here this sport is called Fight till you drop where our contestants will fight mamono until they can no longer stand! Here's what you need to know the players will be put in a big area that will serve as the arena. They will fight groups of our mamono participators that will be there to fight and potentially rape them round after round.

It will start with our weakest mamono challengers then after they're defeated they will be teleported out then replaced by the next bunch of mamono after a one-minute break before the next round. The group of mamono that appear each round will be worse than the last but each one the human players beat will get an award and each one will be better every round cleared. Along with the newest batch of mamono jars and chests with items will be teleported around the arena to help the contestants in their time of need but the humans must be careful. Some of these containers could be a mamono in disguise so approach these at your own risk. The contestants themselves will be using weapons of there own choice made from demon realm silver of course, so no one will be killed.

Other than their armor and weapons they cannot bring any items with them from the outside what they are given along with what they find in chests and jars will be what they use. The game will be over when all human contestants are incapacitated and or raped and will be given the awards they earned if they have earned them and possibly a sweetheart. No one is allowed to hide for too long if a player hides or camps for one minute their location will be told to their opponent's. So that's it I hope you all enjoy the show and see how long they survive!" Looking at the witch in front of you she teleports you and the others to the area you will be fighting in WWYD?

(The area everyone is fighting in is your choice it could be a castle a town a graveyard whichever you prefer)