User blog:MufasaRakeShadowmoon/The Shadow from Past (fan fiction prologue and chapter 1)

Note:this is my first fanfiction soo tell what you think should be improved (may contain scanes of violence against monsters)(english is not my language soo please dont be mad ;3)
Somewhere in the mountains at the territory of order was a peacefull village.Village that was known from being the place where the greatest of the mages were born.This village has been called by humans Greyfell... a place where the heroes are born...Peaople that lived there was living happy lives they didnt need to care about the war with mamono... that peace could last forever... but someday one of the heroes decided to settle down there with his wife that would be not soo untypical but the woman wasnt a human... it was a monster just like the ones order were fighting against Villagers however accepted them and treated as a interesting addition to the village... Some years has passed and the first child of the hero were born...

A boy that were born had green emerald eyes a silver hair and a fox-like tail and ears that were in the same colour he has been welcomed as the promise of the new beggining and treated just like every other child in his age.

Unfortunately one day something went horribly wrong...

When one of the young mages leaved the village to join the order as a hero he informed them about the monsters that live there...soon enought they decided to "Purify" that "place of evil" and a group of soldiers were sent... Their goal was obvious... kill everyone in the village and leave no track of coexistence... Mages that lived there tried to protect villagers but for templars wearing antimagic armors they were not even a threat.Soon the whole village has been destroyed... as the templars were about to leave the heard a cry...

When they entered one of the ruined houses they found a little boy sitting next to corpse of inari.. it was obvious that he was not a human...however one of the soldiers protected him... the name of this soldier was Aetrox...

Templar 1:get out of our way Aetrox this boy is a demon! he needs to be killed!

Aetrox:I wont allow you to do that...*he raised his axe ready to attack his fellow soldier*

Templar 2:Why are you protecting that creature Aetrox... its just a monster...


 * he looked at the fox-boy that could be not older than seven years old and at the dead inari*

Templar 2:just look at them! This is demon no matter how you look at him!


 * he shouted as he charged at fox ready to execute him... however his attack has been blocked*

Templar 2:who dares to...


 * in front of him a man wearing an armor made of gold was standing giving him an angry look*

Templar 2:C-Commander!*he bows*

Templar commander:why are you attacking this boy hmm?

Templar 1:its a monster! my lord we should kill him before he...

Templar commander:Before what acctualy?*he sayed with calm voice as he smiled*Dont say that your afraid of a normal kid.

Aetrox:my lord...we cant kill him like this... this is too much for me...

Templar commander:Who sayed we will kill him?

Aetrox:huh? Re-really?

Templar commander:If killing him is too much for you we will just leave him here and let this...*looks at the fox-kid* Demon... live on his own...

Aetrox:WHAT??! Hes too young to take care of himself!

Templar 1:you didnt heard the commander? All demons must be killed soo just deal with it...


 * he sayed as he leaved the house with the other one*

Aetrox:We...we cant just leave him here to die!


 * he shouted with anger in his voice*

Templar commander:Why do you even care?


 * still looking at kid*

Aetrox:Hes not a normal monster! look at him! Its must be a half-monster or something like that! he can become one of us!

Templar commander:Hmm... he could be usefull...

Aetrox:Then lets take him with us! we shall show him that he needs to protect the humanity!

Templar commander:...*looks at the angry Aetrox* if you can take care of him then fine...we will show him what being a human means...

Aetrox:thank you commander.


 * as templar opens the door of the house he turns his gaze at Aetrox and fox-kid once again*

Templar commander:hmm... ask if that "thing" has an name... were heading out.


 * Aetrox turns his gaze at crying boy and smiles*

Aetrox:you dont need to worry about anything... i will take care of you... what is your name


 * fox-kid tries to wipe away his tears as he responds*

Fox-kid:R...Ra...Rake...my name is Rake...wha...what happened to my mommy?


 * Aetrox picks up the kid from the ground and hugs him*

Aetrox:She has been killed by monsters... dont worry i wont let them hurt you...


 * Aetrox leaves the house with Rake as thought came to his head*

Aetrox:(thinking) hes more like human than monster... im sure after some training he will become a good soldier...

Templar 1:your taking this thing with us?*he shouted with anger in his voice*you will get us all killed!

Aetrox:Dont worry Zed...*he sayed while facing the templar* im sure he will be fine hero...


 * he sayed as the whole unit marched back to their home... to Lascatie...

Record of the first conversation:
Priesstes Amira:Hello there your the kid that was brought from Greyfell dont you?


 * subject not responding*

Priesstes Amira:I asked you a question soo please answear.

Fox:yes... i am the one from Greyfell...

Priestess Amira:much better if you answear our questions im sure we will become friends


 * Fox-kid looks at the priestes scared and asks a question*

Fox:where am i?

Priesstes Amira:At the mainquaters of the order in the city of Lascatie

Fox:who are you?

Priesstes Amira:My name is Amira im priesstes of Chief Godess what about your name?

Fox:Rake... my name is Rake...

Priesstes Amira:hmm... nice to meet you Rake please tell me what happened at the village...

Fox:i dont know... i went out of the village and spent most of the day at lake... when i came back my mommy and daddy were dead...

Priesstes Amira:hmm... thats sad


 * priesstes moves closer to subject and hugs "It"*

Priesstes Amira:tell us about your parents

Fox:mommy was always smiling...


 * stops in mid sentence*

Fox:I miss my mommy...


 * test subject starts to cry*

Priesstes Amira:oh... please calm down if your daddy would see you now he would be mad

Fox:h... he would?


 * priesstes silently nods*

Fox:al... alright... i...i wont cry...

Priesstes Amira:lets continue what was your father like?

Fox:Daddy were always helping everyone in the village... eveyone always was happy to see him...


 * subject looks at floor simingly emotionless*

Priesstes Amira: what happened in the village Rake? do you know anything?

Fox:when i came back from lake everyone was dead... my mommy... my daddy... my friends...

Priesstes Amira:who did this? do you know anything?

Fox:there were soldiers all over the place... they were wearing clothes similiar to my daddy... they took me away from the village...


 * subject seems to act more like an adult than like a child*

Priesstes Amira:About those who saved you what do you know about them?

Fox:Name of the one who found me is Aetrox when they found me they were talking something about demon...


 * fox suddenly stops talking*

Priesstes Amira:Well? please continue... that cant be everything!


 * one of high rank Templars enters the room and commands us to end the first session...*

Priesstes Amira:well thank you for answearing our questions Rake...


 * subject bows*

Fox:thank you for conversation...


 * Priesstes pats his head and leaves the room*

End of session 1

Record of the second conversation:

 * priesstes enters the room and appologise for being late after that she sits at chair and starts the conversation*

Priesstes Amira:hello Rake i hope you sleept well


 * subject smiles and responds happily*

Fox:hello! its good to see you again


 * fox seems to threat priesstes as a friend*

Priesstes Amira:well your way different today! i hope you ready to answear some of our questions

Fox:Yes i am however i also have some questions...

Priesstes Amira:ofcourse as long as you answear our questions we shall ansear yours... well then lets continue from question i asked yesterday...

Fox:allright...The one who found me was Aetrox he were wearing armour made of silver...


 * Priesstes interrups Fox*

Priesstes Amira:wait... how do you know it were made of silver?

Fox:i cant sense energy though the silver and bronze... and im pretty sure it wasnt bronze...

Priesstes Amira:you do have some interesting abbilities...please continue...


 * subject smiles*

Fox:i answeared one question now its your turn!

Priesstes Amira:go ahead and ask then...

Fox:what are monsters?

Priesstes Amira:Monsters are servants of evil they bring plagues and kills those who are following the voice of Godess... They are everything that is bad in this world...


 * subject starts to jump in place while waving his tail around*

Fox:Allright! my turn now!

Priesstes Amira:do you know anything more about those who found you?

Fox:yes the other persone name was Zed however im not sure what armour he was wearing... it was more like an robe than acctual armor...


 * group of templars enters the room and listen to the conversation*

Priesstes Amira:how was your first day in Orpanage? did you found any friends?

Fox:...only one...

Priesstes Amira:can you tell us who is he?

Fox...

Priesstes Amira:Rake?

Fox:...


 * subject remains silent for the rest of time*

Priesstes Amira:well... thats all for today... i hope you will tell us more next time...


 * pats his head*

Priesstes Amira:good bye Rake

Fox:uhmm...


 * after that templars took him to unknown place and our group lost the possibility of talking with him*

End of session 2

Age: 9
Third and most likely last conversation:


 * priesstes enters the room and greets with Fox*

Priesstes Amira:hello Rake its been a long time...

Rake:...

Priesstes Amira:soo i see that you got another tail huh?

Rake:uhmm...


 * subject seems to remain silent when the guards are around after noticing it priesstes asked them to leave*

Priesstes Amira:please could you leave? we need some informations and it looks like we wont recive them as long as your here...


 * guards leaved the room*

Rake:soo your going to ask questions again?

Priesstes Amira:yes i would like to get some answears.... first of all why are we not allowed to continue our research?

Rake:Im being trained to serve our Godess just like you were...

Priesstes Amira:huh? are you going to become priesst?

Rake:not really when leader of the order noticed that i can turn monsters back to humans i have been chosen to become Hero and now it will be my job to protect our kind from those wicked monsters...

Priesstes Amira:you... changed...

Rake:we both are following our orders... no matter how young or old we are we are the part of this holy crusade and we shall protect the humanity!

Priesstes Amira:but... your too young to be hero!

Rake:My father broke the law... i will be the one to clenanse the name of my family...


 * subject stands up and goes towards the exit*

Priesstes Amira:Wait! you still didnt answeared my questions!

Rake:Pray to the Godess... she will show you the right path...


 * test subject leaves the room with that our last session is compleated*

End of session 3

(Thats all for the first chapter and prologue please tell me what your opinions are)