User blog comment:Dragon´s Blade/World Coexistence Alliance/@comment-24664052-20140529033421

Sorry to disturb, guys, but can I ask your suggestions for writing my fan fic?

As you already know, if you have read the fan fic, it's about a retired mercenary who misses the life of adventure but has been horrified by his experiences. There would be flash backs of his life that are either three things; the happy times he spent with his fellow contractors, the trauma he got when his friends went down one by one and the war crimes they were paid to do so by the Order against the monsters.

Speaking of the war crimes, I don't know if I can make it less violent, but still show that they were paid to be amoral punch-clock villains and murderers and one of them will develop disturbing attitudes that 'he loves watching monsters die'. As for the trauma he got with battle experiences with the monsters, I could not think too much, save for an Order incursion into Lescatie that went wrong and 'cost the life' of one of his friends.

Here's the fan fic