User blog comment:NightmareAura/Cold Day, Warm Heart- A Dragon One-Shot/@comment-31122347-20170224125526/@comment-30895326-20170224180124

Thank you very much for the review.

Gosh, all the stuff that you mentioned was totally unintentional and I love it. Maybe I should give myself a little more credit for my writing. At least, if I can continue doing stuff like this.

I actually felt the ending was a smidge rushed. Glad that didn't seem to be the case.

You're right. I probably should have given a more reasonable excuse why he would stay around her despite the treatment. I could chalk it up to guys in this setting usually don't put up much of resistance to Mamono, but that would be a lazy reason.

I'm glad you liked that part. A very tsundere line if I do say so.