Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-39280634-20200128121517

I'm glad to know that I helped in some way, as little as it was. Also good to hear things are getting along nicely for you and wish you the best of luck. And good on Sir Vengeance helping you too.

Just curious, will you ever publish your novel here ?

Edit: I can't say I'm a good critic since my own writing is rather lacking, say compared to yours or other people's. But I still believe that snippet was appropriately dramatic and not TOO dark. I liked it, regardless.