User blog comment:SPARTAN-047/You Do Not Mess With Powerhouses/@comment-30895326-20170423225720/@comment-24026095-20170424000312

Greentexts are shorter and all that, and I was wondering if I could add some zing this way like Penywise does.

Shame it wasn't to your tastes, but that's all good. The amazoness might have been too rough. I've in fact planned a mild BDSM tale for the dark elf, with some actual humiliation and explicit stuff, during or after the requests. Or since TJK has already asked for one with a dark elf, it could be incorporated into that.

What went wrong with this one? Was it the roughness, the lack of sympathy to the protagonist, or making an amazoness seem too sadistic instead of lovingly dominant and matriarchal?