User blog comment:Udon thief/You're My Sanctuary-ch.1 (M/F, lamia, romantic, anon)/@comment-25270168-20150421224839

I guess your "experiment" meant various ways to describe and refer to "you" without hardcoding any information about main protagonist. And I must say, you performed admirably. No, you did an outstanding job in that department, I find it a very interesting move with describing what "you" say, without placing any actual dialogue on "your" side.

Also apart from that, this is a really good story, original idea with that "myth-world" staff, and well written, I think I saw a couple minor language errors but absolutely nothing serious, can't even remember them now. All I can say: great job and looking forward to continuation!

One thing however. Add a disclaimer that it's not set in MGE setting, but loosely based on MGE. This will prevent any formal issues, KC may or may not frown at his world getting twisted (not in a bad sense, but still). Your story shouldn't cause any issues, but since it's posted on MGE wikia better be safe than sorry.