Thread:Proziomix031/@comment-31122347-20170220201349/@comment-31122347-20170307101620

Okay! Its done!

I did not put the tags "fan-fiction" or "one-shot" on it, so you and I can go over it 1st.

Lemme know whatcha think. If you wanna change anything, please post it here, or on my message wall. I want it to be "finished" before I add those tags to it. I'd rather not people see comments that suggest a huge number of edits. It detracts from the overral expirnce I think