Thread:HoundTheDestroyer93/@comment-25808351-20170821013859/@comment-28358106-20170830182852

The best advice I can give, short of proofreading for you, is to read a book that is in the genre and make comparisons of sentence structure. That applies to all writers, though.

And if you want me to, I can give some tips when it comes to similies, descriptions, etc.