Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-27303410-20180910043729/@comment-36855838-20180916043647

Nothing is wrong with the girl, and that's what's wrong with her!

She can't really create a conflict of her own, so either we have to have a reverse deus ex machina where the setting f*cks them over or the Male character has to have cold feet.

Neither is very appealing, hardship out of nowhere feels wrong.

The alternative is everything going swimmingly, which would be like sitting next to a couple, watching them flirt and so on.

Okay, so I get that that's kind of the point, but it's nice to have a good plot to go with your lewd materials, isn't it?

See, the whole thing is, without adversity, eveeything boils down to:

it went great, and then they f*cked.

As opposed to, say:

They had a good date, but she was pushy, and he felt scared so he left, but he came back and they made up, and then they f*cked.