Thread:LightningS9/@comment-28358106-20170418021946/@comment-28358106-20170420041559

The only real statement I would make is that you might want to explain better their reasons for being immune to latent DE and things like mind control, mostly because one of those alone would be an extremely powerful thing. Not even Hound is immune to DE's influence. I'm not suggesting you take those powers away, but since they essentially nullify the most immutable and overbearing influence in the MGE plane, it'd change pretty much everything around them, and it's especially strange considering they have to take in DE to use their skills.

As an example, Doc isn't influenced by DE because his wife is a Golem whose power source works as a DE sinkhole, turning DE into SE. The influence of being her husband, and having kids that work on the same principle, has rubbed off on him, so much so that he can withstand DE's influence for a period of time, bolstering his defenses with arcanum if necessary. But if he were to be seperated from them for a time, the effect would wear off eventually. But even this limited influence is so powerful that it's going to create a huge problem for them down the road, and it culminates into the final arc of his story. Just some food for thought.