Thread:ImperialFish/@comment-25720867-20150103151939/@comment-25188867-20150105022211

Uh...I appreciate criticism, but this seems a little aggressive. I'd rather not start up an argument. Even if it does seem a little hostile, I suppose that the sentence structure could be a bit more uniform. I don't really see anything wrong with these examples, but I now have a general sense of what you mean. I'll keep it in mind if I write another 'fic.