User blog comment:MockingJester/Neglect.../@comment-37028137-20190619162943

I really liked this story, especially how you depicted the Atlach-Nacha as a caring motherly figure, since they are often sidelined due to their appearance and somewhat abrasive demeanor (though there is truly nothing ill meant behind it). I would love a sequel exploring how the child gets on with his new family, though that is of course up to you.

All in all apart from my rambling tangent I'd say 10/10 and good show sir.

Cheers,

The Weary TimeLord.