Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-37028137-20200214033003

Greetings Lance,

My apologies on getting back in so late. But I finally made it through ‘A brave new world, a scared young heart - Part 1' (The clinic has been overly busy so work has been hell, and not in the good way.)

Anyways enough wallowing, back to the task at hand. I really enjoyed the first part. You made the characters seem realistic and fairly smart. Lance, (The other Lance that is, cheeky by the by. Then again I cannot judge.) Anyways he appears to be fairly competent and adjusts to his new world rather smoothly, though I do appreciate his confusion, it makes him relatable and empathetic, which are good qualities to have in a character.

Meri Belle was a sweetheart and just a joy to read about; though I got the distinct impression she was hiding a sad past? The two characters interactions were lovely to read what with Lance’s dour mannerisms being countered by Meri’s bubbly, radiant personality. I assume she will help him become less severe as they continue to interact and she will open up more?

You have me hooked good sir, and I want to read more! That being said I need to get to bed, I have to get up for work in three hours, so I had better catch what sleep I can.

Cheers,

The Weary TimeLord.