Talk:Titania/@comment-26120285-20160703070309/@comment-27346571-20160821191658

I hate to sound like a dick, but there are some grammatical errors in this. Other than that, the story is great and you should keep trying harder, as there is always room for improvement.

I hug the Titania back, happy that she actually did become a fairy queen and she wasn't going crazy. Though the fact that it took her only two years to do so worries me, I'm otherwise happy to hear that. "So, would you and your little friends like something to eat before going back?" I asked, looking down at the tiny fairies attepting to hug me, but just barely reaching around my legs. She and her fairies agree and let go of me so I can go to the kitchen and cook some food. After I'm done cooking the fairies and the Titania fix up the living room, and I set the food down on the table in the living room. After their meal, they leave to go back to their kingdom and leave me to go back to whatever I was doing.