User blog comment:Safnar/Pg 10 The Last Harem Member/@comment-25574135-20150201234314

as i wrote before, I love this story. Each charicter has thier own distinct personality, and i really like where the story seems to be headed.

I honestly cannot wait to see Lela and Sam get some time alone together.

(expecially liked how detailed their first kiss was. i feel that that scene perfectly captured the MG essence )

in a nutshell, keep doing what you are doing. i cannot think of anything that needs to be changed or added.

Only issue in this chapter is there are a few spelling errors.