Talk:Ochimusha/@comment-29693921-20170410210148

This is likely my last take on this Monster Girl. I'm tired of talking about her.

What I will do here is sum up everything I feel is wrong with her.

Since I didn't have the time to do that yesterday, since she had just been released and I had to go, I will do it now, instead of splitting my opinion into multiple comments.

The only thing I feel I should talk about is her perfection. As Galeah pointed out, the Ochimusha borrows aspects from different, compelling Monsters, making for an abomination at the end.

As he put it: "She's as strong as a Cursed Sword, disciplined as a Lizardman, unkillable as a Living Doll, immortal as a Mummy, loyal as an Orc slave, devoted as a Kikimora, submissive as a Cu Sith, sophisticated as a Kejourou (poetry and politeness and arts, etc.), respectful of her husband's desires as a Holstaur... etc."

That, to me, is her biggest and most unforgivable flaw.

As I said previously, the fact she is this perfect evokes a sense of revulsion, where you can't help but feel something is terribly off about her personality. That feeling is caused by her desirable (And unobtainable) traits.