Board Thread:Fan-made Monsters/@comment-26380985-20150518024546/@comment-26380985-20150527083025

MamonoGal1311 wrote: I have to say, I'm confused by the constant changing perspective. I find the whole he, she, you switch very hard to follow.

Really it should be constantly third-person point of view, not second. The whole premise is about how men and Mamono, not you and Mamono. You is never really used in the translated profiles. I know that I sound a bit harsh, but I just really want to resolve these issues. I can always try writing up a more grammatically correct version and you can edit this and post that instead. Please let me know. Excuse me. Whenever I write bigger texts is with a traslation system and sometimes it becomes confuse with the verbal people. I noted recently. I alredy make some corretions is any better?