User blog comment:Rikoswind29/Prequel to fanfic is complete/@comment-24431359-20140205004708

Hello there, Rikoswind.

The story is quite good. As for writing mistakes, you might want a beta-reader to do the checking and revising before you post it. I can help with that, actually, although it will take at least a week before I can send back the revised version of your work. (My schedule is a little...tight.) Just post on my message wall when you're done with your work.

Good job on the prologue/prequel. :)