Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-39280634-20200307111845

Good day, Weary. Yes, I manage to at least read the first chapter, like I promised there (really sorry it took this long). I don't see any problems with it save for a few missing punctuations; like here for instance: "I was asleep, content in my own thoughts then Ring, ring “Shit” I moved to check the caller ID"; I think it needs commas in some places (never thought I'd be giving pointers on punctuation since I'm rather bad on the grammar side). The scene was descriptive like you first shown me and I liked this new design of the TARDIS' inside (though I never imagined it to be this large that even YOU could get lost in it). I'm still not sure what mental image to make of the lighting inset and the rotors (I'm trying to look back at past TARDIS designs for reference). All in all, a fun start and I liked it.

My only real complaint (or rather concern) is that you said there's gonna be a Berserk crossover. I mean, are you sure about that ? Berserk is... really, really, really 'heavy', to put it lightly (hah) and I'm not sure how well it will mesh with MGE. I guess it's already done by this point and knowing you it won't be that bad. Well okay, my point is that Berserk haunted me for some time (and I couldn't read it very much; I know, I'm weak), so uh, good luck with that part.

Also, I need your thoughts on another thing. You know Rep, right ? The Reptile King ? He's a cool dude that I sometimes talk to. You see, I found one of his fanmade Mamonos that... aren't quite as friendly as they should be (hence one of my worries from that thread I made). And I reacted poorly to it. And I'm afraid I have slighted him and insulted his work (the Mamono in question is here:https://monstergirlencyclopedia.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:538542; and another one here by someone else:https://monstergirlencyclopedia.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:610994). I know they wanted to do an 'experimental' twist on a Mamono and I meant no disrespect t their works, but to me it looked too drastic and un-Mamono like. Do you think I went out of line ?