Talk:Monster Girls/@comment-37028137-20190911215152

I'm back like an anti-biotic resistant super bacteria!

So I've finally gotten to the point in the story where my OC Lilim fully mutates/transitions into her Hybridized Lilim/Vampire Form. (I write multiple chapters ahead of publication FYI as in 20+ that’s why no mutation has actually appeared in the story as yet.)

In any case I was trying to determine a way to distinguish the visual transformation of the character and her unique appearance afterwards when she’s more Vampiric in nature. Physical description is really key in books since there’s no actual images as there are in say, movies. So I wanted to be able to mention several physical traits in appearance which have morphed so to speak in order to communicate that’s she is something different from a normal Lilim, something new and powerful.

After that long but necessary lead up my question is: Can I change the physical appearance of my Lilim/Vampire OC to reflect traits and qualities of both Mamono? I.e. different wing and tail designs, different hair, wing, and tail colors instead of white (like a mixture). A different skin color or physicality?

Or would that offend too many sensibilities and be too broad a scope?

As always thank you for your responses in advance and I realize this must be sickening by now so thank you for putting up with my numerous inane questions.

Cheers,

The Weary TimeLord.