User blog comment:Altenativefuturefan27/Help Developing a Fic/Need Ideas?/@comment-25601391-20141218170933/@comment-24695597-20141218182608

I like the Idea of Dividing the story between guts and the Succubusess

Hmm a Impact I dont know How what words would be used to make a impact woud you give a example.

Silly is depending because they might look like silly word by word I would try to make them look twisted