User blog comment:Yourboyblue/When worlds collide part 1: Where it started/@comment-24026095-20170524041557/@comment-24026095-20170525044352


 * Puts a march hare's cardboard cutout on the ground to discourage pilots*

Welcome To The Sex Dungeon, mate.

That's wonderful, Yourboyblue, I'm sure you'll do well. You don't have to change anything in your writing, of course, you have your own style. Their writing styles and formatting may give you room to improve, that's all.

EDIT: BreakawayRepublic is the most viewed and voted author on TouchFluffyTail and here, so you could look at his plots too. He isn't outvoting the rest of MGE writers for nothing.