Talk:Undine/@comment-26380985-20160117080656/@comment-25270168-20160120173320

You'll want to check this fragment:

" It's actually a funny story. Bet with a guy who would make a Undine believe a guy, I think his name was Daniel, liked her and it was not that I did, but he was already committed to a succubus then she was heartbroken. Why the question?"

Who liked her? Not that I did what? Who was already commited? Billy? Daniel? Who's saying this sentence? I have no idea who's who now, use proper person before verb. Plus it still wouldn't tell us nearly enough to understand what happened. As it is now this whole sentence makes no sense, no offense. Please rewrite it more clearly.