Thread:Doctor Ibrahim/@comment-26517142-20160802111735/@comment-28358106-20160805021718

As far as the origins of your OC goes and how he fits into the overall plan, I think it's fine, and you've given your character some depth. Oz is a clever creation, and I like it quite a bit. I do have a bias against overly powerful protagonists, but as long as you are satisfied with the story you are trying to tell, that's all that matters. I could give you some specifics if we discussed which direction you want to take the story. (My email is on my blog.)

Also, I hope you don't mind the liberties Im taking witj Alcamarie. I'm setting her up to be quite the villain for you. And if you read closely into how she fits in, Jeiel may be quite angry with the Doctor later...