Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-28144855-20170730184854/@comment-28144855-20170731172916

Very good responses All! WARNING WARNING, multiple kudos inbound!

But Bob! Wow! First of all, while three of the responses were decent, the fourth (third in order) was gold for several resons.

First, the use of a kid OC was smart, even if I'd say 8-10 years would be more fitting as Mamono tend to not attack kids up to 10 'mostly'. But the Radicals are 50:50 about it as I get it from canon. Yet, having a group of them after you it didn't seemed an asspull that they let him be. One of them voiced her concern and the others listened, they are not braindead imbecils. It was not luck or plot convenience, in a group there is always a voice of reson. In their timeline (similar to Earth that period) kids used to help around all the time, there were no Unicef and shit screaming 'child labor' 'abuse'... and kids learned early to be a usefull part of scociety instead of parasites they grow to be today.

Also, the dialogue between the Mamono was so damn funny, even if the situation was serious, it is difficoult to explain. I skimmed the story at work and I laughed like a damn fool my coworkers gave me the look. I know, I'll go to hell for laughing at someones misery, but to me it was actually hilarious.

But what get to me the most and I fucking like it, it gave me that Ace Combat 4 vibe, just with slightly different roles and outcomes. The Barkeep and the 'Barkeep's daughter', the enemy occupying the place, the uncle, the kid staying with the enemy... I honestly waited the Mobius1 impersonator here and the kid writing him that letter at the end and I would have actually do a standing ovation on top of my work table at my job. (Yeah, I'm an Ace Combat fan, even my fan country here is a shoutout to the franchise, Emmeria!)

@ Enrico, you were far from the bar, with the kind, superhuman ladies only 150m from you, an untrained man, how the heck did you outrun them, some could even fly? Anyways that shows how hard it is, so it is Ok. Truly the kid OC was the only thing I missed simply by not thinking of the times the setting is happening and the customs from that period beforehand.

Oh, and btw, are you Italian Enrico?