User blog comment:Altenativefuturefan27/Help Developing a Fic/Need Ideas?/@comment-86.100.116.109-20141206133630/@comment-24695597-20141208043329

I like that one sounds more better.As how Guts appeared in her life might have been during a Eclipse(Since everything related to Big EVENT in berserk have something to do with an eclipse as entrance).He leave the home he ever known to walk away until he is far enough that he start remembering what he did and he was about to vomit and put his hands on his mouth so he maintain the vomit and swallow it and keep running without looking. After that day everything his beautiful dreams would turn into nightmares many scenes of the nightmare have no sense to him specially the dog like fiend that always speak but he couldnt hear his voice but he felt they were filled with malice. When he still was at home her mother use to lecture him forcing him to learn and learn (He lived in dungeon filled with many rare goodies and his mother is the owner so she might have the goodies to entertain herself) he always run away from her to explore deeper into the dungeon to play and pass through every trap that even are beyond. I would name this Idea inpired by a Song named Carry on My Wayward son. Title:My Wayward Child. This story might always start as her monder wish he would someday return home. But I the Idea of what he would be doing is hard I have in mind that he would wonder around the world looking for something he would work on many things.

Druella would make things more interesting since she would desgise herself in many ways and might even reveal herself and say it directly teasing stalking Guts(She might even warn  him when her sisters are Close to make  her pray have feeling of Debt is equal to Guilt to repay) But I think she will disguise to so she have more oportunity. The one that I refer to be brainless is the Wurm she once have sighten something she like she will crush anything in her path she will not care if about the threatning feeling the dragon slayer  have. Guts would be recruited but once he is done with the task and get payed and get going. As the part where deity whisper(No Manifestation just mixing himself/herself in his thoughts) in his ear she/he would say thing indirectly making him have the hunger to know about. I though about making him to a village that was Isolated from the world but I would say its mistery since it have a certain enchantment to appear and disappear every many years Example:every thousand years a village appears transforming a swamp into garden said village have people that will have everything looks happy making you think that never the war have passed through this lands stays 4 days and 4 nights once the time is out the village disappear with all the villagers leaving the foreigner outside. As for vengeance he would only avenge if he ever have something unvaluable not able to be replace.

Once the Centaur gets drunk the relationship would lead to misunderstandings. She would naturally be atracted to guts since he still have the Branch only that this version dosnt have a great influence and he have this thing like magnet that makes people want to know. He will travel to possibly experience similar situations that he experienced only more lighter. He might change acompanient depending in the circunstances. Would you sugest me a monster