User blog comment:Xmodius/Green Thumb/@comment-24511976-20160507091057

The characters were fantastically written. It would have been more representitative to the disabled community (Me and others) if Allie was in a wheel chair pot. I loved how the story was constructed and written. The different archtypes used for the girls were different than the typical Alrune or honeybee, but they fit the story so well. The only jostling idea was that Winnie was spanked by Gordon which makes me the reader imagine her as an adult. And then when she's reintroduced she is reimagined thanks to your writing to an age more like Calvins. Thus, a bit confusing, and she didn't have much of a backstory. She really rode on the whole winnie the pooh references. The disciplinary mother who is a master swordsmen that weilds a feather duster was hailarious! And how she says certain monster girl things to the other girls is perfect.



I really loved the shy girl bee and the tsundere allrune. Perfectly written and still assertive enough to stoke my desires. This story was well written, had fantastic dialogue, drama that made the reader catch his breath and just a fantastic balance of everything. This story is phenomial.