Thread:Flodoomable/@comment-25566645-20141022234416/@comment-25566645-20141024211651

Yeah, didn't notice the chimeara waifu part until I was finished with the story. As for the chainsaw, I have a hard time thinking about monster girls in a contemporary setting, I place them in the more medieval times, with science earning much more exploration than science.

Also, I had to doublecheck it as well, as I didn't think I wrote that he spat at her feet, and he didn't. It's easily confused, but I wrote, " I gave an annoyed spit to the ground at my feet. "

I hardly claim to be an oxford-standard master of english, but, although the sentence was composed uniquely, I proofread it, and while I certainly agree it could've had better execution, I don't believe it's gramatically incorrect, though it could easily be, in which case I would love a link showing me how it was wrong and in what way I could've improved it.

Regarding languages, if ever I was in a setting where people spoke no english but they did speak spanish, I have full confidence I could ask where the bathroom was and tell people that I didn't speak the language. I'm nearly finished with the potential pilot to a much longer series, if it's good enough. I'll let you know when it's finished and posted, if you're interested.