Thread:Flodoomable/@comment-25566645-20141022234416/@comment-25566645-20141218202853

Finally posted, it's not fantastic, and there may be a few gramatical errors that dodged my eye, so let me know if you find them. And feel free to ask any questions you need or want to about the story, I'll answer all (most) you have, you know I have a confusing writing style occasionally.