Talk:A Certain Universal Principle - Brave New World 2 - Part 2 - Sleep-Mode/@comment-25188867-20140718154527/@comment-25113070-20140718155809

Thank you.

Lol i am glad some people are noticing the little tid bits i am building up gradually.

I enjoy writing stories even if i hated english as a subject, so i try my best to proofread and change parts of the story before posting.

i have begun to change my writing style to further improve the readability and flow by getting rid of excess "he" said, "she" replied, situations which i started with this part, i will probably go back over the first part and change it to the new style so the whole second book follows it.

regards.

MK