Thread:Party Vanderbilt/@comment-25269011-20140908155924/@comment-25035274-20140911183455

Gotcha. Well, for that I might suggest using a physical symbol instead of just keeping large blocks of text. For instance, you could try putting one of these between separate sections of story.

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Using something like that is kinda like showing you're moving to a different chapter, or at least a different point of view, without actually having to move to a different physical chapter.

So... Smaller paragraphs with a line between story sections. Those two things would help the readability a lot.