User blog comment:JeielYozama/Aguilar One Shots - Gazer/@comment-39154674-20190521120501

First one to comment? Damn, it's a shame that few people visit the fanfic side.

Nice story, solid writing. VERY good closure. I could learn a few things from you, actually. I tend to drag a story, I find it difficult to write a decent closure within a one-shot length of text. But I do estimate you could write a mini-series using this one-shot as a basis.

Will the one-shots be linked like that? Nerid seems too cute for just a one-shot.

So... looking forward to the next one. Get those fingers typing!