User blog comment:Altenativefuturefan27/Help Developing a Fic/Need Ideas?/@comment-24695597-20141208201257

'Here is preview of what I have writen depending on which plot I choose this scene could be the start of the 1st chapter or part of another chapter. I would like to know what you think about it also tell me if you see any errors.' Pushing forward was all he could do, it didn’t matter anymore his past and future what it mattered now was the present in where he is standing on right now, even if he couldn’t taste the blood of the thing that played with his fate that made him taste of unpleasantness through his life: flashes when he killed Gambino; Even if he couldn’t hear the scream of the thing that made him cry his existence to survive: Flashes people hanging from tree; Even if couldn’t see the thing that made him gaze through hell itself: Flashes of the nightmares he lived every day; Even if he couldn’t smell the scent of the thing that made him sniff the putrid odor of dead: Flashes of corpses and how penetrating was their odor or Even if he couldn’t feel pain he is sure of one thing… he will make sure of showing him the same unpleasant sensations he endured even until this very day: Flashes of the hellhound, his comrades being devoured by demons, he severing his arm and seeing the man that once was his friend sacrifice them and raped the women he loved while he… watched unable to do something only watch as a demon pierce his claws in his right eye making the last one he would see with it. But now he knows that he must keep pushing forward through the piece of meat that was in front of him until it ceased his beating and have control of his own fate.

In a world made of blood heads that have a tormented expression with flowing around just like if the blood was a gigantic heart ‘beating, beating…’ faster and faster as a figure covered in black armor charging at speed with a bastard sword with a sinister aura. The black armored figure standing was quite tall between 6’3” (190 cm) of height he wears along full body black armor that has a feral helmet with a jaw full of sharp blades like teeth that could torn the flesh from the bone.