Thread:Safnar/@comment-25720867-20150314171731

Been waiting for you to show up in the chat. But ye ain't showin up...

So. I've seen in some of your fan fic's that your putting something like: "From here on you know how it goes. Stop reading if you don't want ####. You've been warned!"

Now that is something that should NOT appear in a fan fic, thus I must strongly recomend against its further ussage.

I understand that you may not be the best when it comes to this sort of things, even I avoided such scenarios until I just so stumbled upon a certain 'nother fan fiction on 'nother site.

Even though there were people cassualy enjoing themselves, it was wrotten in a hidden and sofisticated manner. One that did not disturb the eye and was a pleasant read.

At that point I considered laviscious the act of adding such deep and open kind of romance into a story. But that fic taught me it can be done in a stealthy manner, when it BOTH peaked my curiosity AND tricked me into reading it dispite my displeasure of such an act. In the end making me feel like it was not such a bad thing the way this man put it.

It was in the open, but it was concealed!

As such I learned from that individual and applied it when the time arrived. Now I wish to bestow upon you the same kind of gift, here.

You are not obligated to read through it all. The last three chapters are the main interest points.

NOW TAKE INTO CONSIDERATION that by no means is my intent to be rude to you in this message. I merely wish to impart teachings. 