Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-37028137-20200428163759

Greetings Lance,

I took a look at Meri's profile, I think it was quite well done. The information was helpful and sheds some more light on the character and her motivation splendidly. No I didn't think it was too much, you struck a good balance with what you disclosed to the reader.

I had one thought though, Meri's image is in black and white, it may give it a bit more energy if it were in colored in.

I could take a stab at it if you'd like.

Cheers,

The Weary TimeLord.