Thread:NegaNoodler/@comment-28358106-20160617031942/@comment-28358106-20160625064946

Nothing wrong with that. You're doing what 99% of the work actually is: writing. Actual physical writing, hammering out the groundwork. The only way to refine what you have is to do exactly what you're doing. You'll find.some stuff works and some stuff that you thought would work actually doesn't; that's natural. But, you're well on your way, and I highly suggest thay when you are at a comfortable level, get someone close to you who knows you well to read it. Family members who read make the best editors because they won't bullshit you.