Board Thread:Fan-made Monsters/@comment-37149941-20181010025229/@comment-27950421-20181010210512

Not a bad concept, though I think the idea of a "twins" mamono could be implemented in a better way than this. It just seems off for them to be so radically different from one another and be the Gemini mamono.

The writing is good, though I think it'd be a good idea to work on your formatting.