Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-39280634-20200613191304

"Besides which you already have one Cow-centric Mamono in Meri, (I know you really like cows Lance...That came out wrong, ahem.)"

Wording, Weary. Someone might take me for a redneck :D - Eh, jokes aside, cowgirls are to me what Lilims are to you so I think you got it.

Anyways, I took some time to think about things after I read your feedback and I have come to some decisions regarding the characters:

The Harpy: I'm going to drop her. I might make her a minor character at best, but I'm not so sure. So yeah, she's out.

Meri's mother: I know very well that it's... rather weird. An explanation for the possible "attraction" is that Meri's mom never actualy got together with a man. She became pregnant due to some odd treatments or cures or even some kind of magic (I need to better work this bit). That way, she can be 'available'. Of course, the characters themselves will find it weird, especialy Lance (the mother has some Mamono-urges that are kinda making her go haywire at times; he would be FAR from agreeing). It's supposed to be a complicated relationship of sorts. I'm sticking with her but it needs more work

Irris the Hellhound: I'm keeping her. I'm kinda proud on her idea, plus I think the group needs a fiercesome Mamono (that, and I've always wanted a Hellhound character).

The Ocelomeh: I'm dropping her.

The Minotaur: I'm keeping her, however she will be affiliated with completely someone else. Let's say that she sports a... lotus insignia.

The Salamander: I'm also droping her. I wanted one too, but I'm not sure how I would actualy make it work.

Not sure if I'm interested in undead Mamonos (never really thought of them), but I miiiight have one or two ideas with the Living Armor. I'll see.

Meri's Holstalamia sister: Ehhh, I don't think I want to drop her. Not only she's one of the few non-clingy Lamia types I found, but she also 'resemble' a Holstaur enough to pass as Meri's sibbling. Not to mention, he's an important part of Meri's backstory. I'd like to heed you but I feel conflicted.

The Fortune Teller Apophis: I'm also keeping her, but she won't be with Lance (not enough things to relate over). Instead, I think I might hook her up with someone else's character (Hound said he was rather interested in her so why not ?)

The Werebat: I'm not only keeping her but I'm also giving her the murder set-up story, just to give her a bigger role and a little more substance and motivation to stay with the group.

The Lilim: ... You want to hog them for yourself, don't cha ? DON'T CHA ? Ehehe, just kidding. Yeah, I don't really have much for ideas here so indeed I'll drop her too. Maybe try this with another story and OC sometime in the future (if I feel like it).

Haylinn the Ryu: You're right, she would be a far better alternative to the Lilim. And considering my group consists mostly of 'everymen and everywomen', she might be that one friend in 'high places' for the group (and while she's gentle, she's another of the powerfull type along with the Hellhound). Besides, I already have plans for a Wurm, but as a minor character.

And with that I think I've reached a more resonable goal for my characters (shouldn't be more than 4 or 5). The rest will either be used for other groups of characters or completely different and unrelated stories/characters. Again, thanks for your feedback. Save for advice, I agree with almost all of them. Let me know if this is a better idea now.