Thread:HoundTheDestroyer93/@comment-25808351-20170821013859/@comment-28144855-20170830162806

Thanks. I did slightly change it from the teaser snippet. I am planning to add a bit of description of the city and him entering the VR before I start to put together my material for the second chapter.

I'm just glad it is kind of OK to read for a native English speaker. Don't get me the wrong way on this, but you guys probably aren't aware of how lucky you are to hail from a English speaking country in today's storytelling era!