Board Thread:Fan-made Monsters/@comment-30700719-20181230033454/@comment-26545936-20181230155859

A good start Janadian, but you're missing the 'Diet' part and Family and Type go together into Family/Type. Generally speaking, while describing their appearance and how they fuck a man is great and all, even describing a bit of how they give birth and what their children do is neat, I don't even do that.

But, you need to go into the finer points of their personality and what they do with a man afterwards, or hell, even before the point of time that they capture a man. We all know that mamono don't fuck 24/7, just see it as great a need as to eat food. Generally, sure, if this is a type of mamono that wouldn't make sense with so much information known about it, than sure it makes sense that this profile would have little information.

But the argument against that is that both you, and someone else might want to RP as a Ghost Leviathan mamono and when they want to look for information for personality and other such things they're just left with an appearance and that they like oral sex. Along with that their children come up to clearer waters.

A good start, but you can do better, I know you can~