Thread:AngryLance/@comment-26517142-20191009083651/@comment-39280634-20191009184902

Alright, after recovering for a bit i managed to binge read the House of Gaunt series and i'd like to give a few short impressions of each part.


 * The girl who lived with me: An adorable little tale about an equaly as adorable Kobold, making friends with an outcast boy; the second thing that melted my cold, lonely heart (right after Rep's Holstalamia). The ending put me on edge a bit, no lie.


 * Hiden Uncertainty: Eri was a sweatheart, going out her way to find the earing. But man, things went south fast later on (really, f#@k bullies). Poor Eri, she was so eager to end it she was willing to turn herself in. And holy crap, she then became Hellbold !


 * A burnt-down memory: Seeing possessed Eri atacking Jared and his dad was absolutely heart-wrenching, her not remembering any of them and why she did this in the first place. And the memory scene was interesting.


 * Stay with me: ... This was freagin' dark, dude ! And and i'm saying that as someone who made Lance's background. Seriously, it's really unlike you, in stark contrast with you warning me once about being 'grimdark'. Damn, hybrid experiments on mamono's and turning them into the past, TRUE monsters they used to be ? Just... damn, didn't thought you had it in ya, much better than my horror story. Leila and Eri loosing control, hundreds of dead people, heavy racism against mamonos... The ending was beatiful, although i find it creepy that the murderous demon that possessed Eri got all chumy with everyone; sure, it's part of her but still...

All in all, i want to praise your writing skills, considering they were among your first stories here and now that i think about it i could only dream to reach this level of skill. And funny thing is that i too was considering adding a Kobold to my stories but droped it for... reasons, dunno. But now i really want to try that too, just to think of good way to implement a Kobold character. I'm also gonna give the Mark Maker series a binge sometime later when i feel much better. Again, other then being darker than i expected, the stories were awesome and tugged at my heart strings (really, really emotional) so i praise you once more. Looking forward to the others.