User blog comment:Blindeyes12/Spell Thief/@comment-25198101-20170418021753

Enjoyable story! Your grammar is very good and much appreciated. The only thing that I found to be unusual was the fact that he talked to himself during the heist, you'd think he'd want to be silent for something like that right? Maybe clarify that he was thinking to himself more than speaking out loud. Otherwise, good job.