Talk:Lilim/@comment-25601391-20141115205333/@comment-25601391-20141120065731

I'm working on it but it's gona be looooooong. Somewhat around the size of a normal book. OK when I'm finihed with chater 1&2 I will send it to you. If there is any critisizm that can improve my writing and the story then tell me that as well.