Talk:Demon/@comment-25035274-20150828180543/@comment-25817038-20150830200627

Having read through a majority of the comments regarding her, and the profile too of course, I have come to notice a problem with her presonality. And it's a problem with the way KC actually did the profile versus my opinion of it.

What I mean is, it's like he wants to have an evil, domineering, maniuplative, malicious monstergirl that corrupts a person and sways them to depravity and doesn't have a problem doing so even if it makes both the Demon Lord and Chief God hate her. Other than perhaps maybe Deruella, I don't really think the MGE has a monster that comes off as bad.

The problem is, KC also can't seem to help himself and has once again gone the way of his boner, and has turned her into just another dinner-making, willful cumdump fetish-bot for her master("husband" is used in the bio but we all know it might as well be master), this time disguised as a sexy, blue-skinned demon woman full of lust and depravity.

What would have made her character/profile far, far more unique and interesting is that yes, she does create the contract, and yes, technically she is bound to the contract to do whatever you say. The problem is, being what she is, what she does, and how good she is at doing it, she corrupts you(prior to the contract) into enjoying being on the submissive end, enjoying sex and lust how she likes it, and thus you more often than not give when she demands. Be it that they see humans as weaker and needing to be taken care of or protected, it's very contradictory to her disposition to enjoy being treated as the servant/weaker/slave by the 'master' all the time.

To me the Demon just comes off as a half-assed attempt at making a more sinister and dangerous monster girl, but ultimately he cannot argue against his own boner and chose to degrade her to the fetish-bot for her husband in the end. I mean also with the voluntarily making him food every day though it's not part of the contract? Why don't we just drop the act and go full-cliche here then, and have her wake up her "husband" with a morning BJ, and make him breakfast, lunch, and dinner in just an apron? I don't know though, it just feels like this one could have been a lot more but KC just couldn't bring himself to see it through, and chose to just make her yet another sex slave for her human.