Thread:The Reptile King/@comment-30115223-20161014004617/@comment-27950421-20161015014835

Well first off in terms on content, monster girls killing people is a bit of a no no in MGE. After the rise of the current demon lord and all of the monsters took on the the features of succubi, they all gained a deap revulsion of the act. They would only do so when it is absolutely necessary and they would never kill a man for food. I'm not going to say that having a mamono or two that does kill is wrong. I have a couple of those. But they should have a good reason for them to be like that. For instance, the Indominus mamono I made is created by inhumane and illegal experiments and due to the way the Raptor and Tyranno instinct interact with each other, Indominus's are driven insane and become full yanderes. And my Gigants are ruthless fighting machines who isn't trying to kill you, but isn't putting much effort into not killing you while she kicks your ass either. So make sure there is a reason behind this sort of mentality. These girls may be monsters but they don'teat people. This isn't MGQ.

You should go into detail, don't be afraid to describe the general temperament of the species and how the different facets of their tenperment affect each other and how they effect the mamonos behavior. Explain what they do and why they do what they do. Don't be afraid to use more floofy language. Look at the words KC uses in the official MGE profiles and mimic his writing style.