User blog comment:PrinceLolipop/Prince Lolipop in "It's Not Gay If It's A Futa, Right?"/@comment-25817038-20160224090735/@comment-25817038-20160225023500

Well now that I've read it, that was fucking fantastic. Very, very much improved over the original. There is literally only one single thing I have to comment on, and it's nothing serious at all. If you can avoid using parenthases, then you're golden, some awesome quality work here.

You expanded on everything very well, and it was a lot easier to read and get a mental picture of what was going on the second time through. Blowjob scene was awesome, and I loved that you added a bit more, even the part where the Hellhound practically spears Dull with her monster-junk. I can only imagine the scene of the hellhound letting a load out in Dull and how hot that would have to look. :P

All in all, 10/10. Keep it up, this was nothing short of flat out entertaining to read. And I'm pretty sure Flod will love this too when he gets around to checking it out.