Board Thread:Fan-made Monsters/@comment-27950421-20160914162852/@comment-29693921-20170411004553

This is what I think about her:

1: I find it interesting that the Glav Monster has a diet wherein ores are included. This is not found anywhere on canon profiles, so it's a good start.

2: I don't know what 'The Reptile Kingdom' is asides from it being your username, so I can't take much from it. It would be interesting to read just about it.

3: Glav's defining feature being its tail is familiar. I can't recall what other Monster shares this ability but I'm pretty sure there is one. Nonetheless, I feel that hasn't been explored as nearly as it should, so this is also good.

4: I have not seen other 'Tyrannos' and neither have I heard of the term 'Primal form'. Both of these things sound promising but demand in-depth explanation, something I'm 100% certain can be found somewhere in a forum.

5: This is where things begin taking off. The fact Glav does not slay people for the sake of expanding territory is already a plus. This, to me, makes it seem as if she were an improved version of the Ochimusha, where her viciousness is considerably subsided. However, the term "The wicked" is too vague. What do you mean with that?

6: The fact Glavs (Or would it be Glaves?) view brawls as meaningless and something that should be below them is also a plus, because it proves me right when saying she is an improved version of the Ochimusha, where she will refuse to fight should it not be for a nobel and fair cause.

7: Okay, so the term I should use is "Glavs" and not "Glaves." Lol.

8: It hasn't been said whether the Glav strikes others in the sense she murders them or in the sense she just puts them to sleep, implying room for misinterpretation is left existant.

9: Unlike Dragons, Glavs don't seem to eager to "Show off", and that's awesome, because it fixes one of the few issues the Dragon species has, which is essentially acting in an arrogant manner.

10: I find it satisfying that, in spite of enganging in alcoholic beverages, Glav's intellectual side is not left aside. You don't see this kind of balance very much on canon profiles. It's essentially one or the other, so that's good too. This also means she is not all-perfect, and that she must have hobbies that aren't as intellectual as she is made out to be on the surface.

11: Glav's abilities in combat are unlike anything I've ever read. There's nothing that describes a Monster fighting with their tail (Specifically) when it comes to canon material. So she is unique in this regard.

12: The way her tail igniting ability is described makes it seem quite dangerous, but provided she strikes only "The wicked", one would argue that if she did use this on someone, they must've done something wrong. I don't know how to feel about this particular point.

13: The Glav's ability to spit out bombs sounds overpowered, especially if she eats rocks for a diet. So that essentially implies she has an infinite stock of explosives stored in her belly that are ready to be spit out as grenades. I don't see this as being super overpowered though, since explosions can, and often will result in backlash. After all, once something explodes, it cannot be contained in time to prevent unwanted damage. She might even be struck by her own shrapnel like this, which makes it this ability overpowered.

14: This section describes the Glav similary to the Ochimusha, except she, unlike the former, has some requirements. The fact she needs a husband that lusts for her automatically prevents bad decisions, such as her marrying an incompetent husband that won't have sex with her. So this is a plus.

15: This is a follow up to point #14. This whole section fails to embrace the possibility of what it would be like for a Glav to meet a man that definitely does not want her with him. It is not said what she would do, so this leaves room for personal interpretation. Take from this what you will.

16: This is a problematic section, because it involves suicide and directly contradicts point #6, where it is said Glavs would not commit to meaningless brawls, something her husband could come to desire unexpectedly. She cannot predict the future, after all. Now, as of suicide. That's just not needed, it's just too extreme. It shows that she is selfish and it also contradicts point #9, where it is implied she is not selfish. I get where you're coming from though. Ahem, Sudoku.

17: Ok, so she gets more intimate with her husband over time. There's not much else to this paragraph.

18: As expected from an extremely long profile. The fact the Glav holds pride for her tail contradicts, to a very minor degree, her supposed lack of pride. This is not a big deal though. I see it as something that adds depth to her.

19: The fact there is a mutated variant out there leaves room for imagination.

Overall, 8/10. She has some aspects that contradict each other but that's pretty much it. I like her otherwise.