User blog comment:Parzival12/Desert Flower- A Pharaoh Fan Fiction- Chapter 2/@comment-27765173-20160224095621

Great, I cannot wait for more!

Two things tho:

1. " This was probably simply due to wear and tear over the ages." It's not out in the wind or rain so it would not exactly have much in the way of wear and tear.

2. At the end part there he doesn't seemed to be affected too much by his broken ankle