User blog:Kaizer-Kaze/Bound, a Journey of Fate:Chapter 1-1

Author's notes
Well this is my first Fan-Fic and I do want and apreciate any comments on any improvements that can be made. this was kind of rushed so do take it a bit easy on me. I do apologize if this seems like a thick wall of text. please enjoy my tale which I plan to make an ongoing series in which you lovley readers input will be valued and have some effect on what happens in later chapters.

Love, Kaizer-Kaze

Story


  In ages past before the age of monster girls even before the age when heroes were called upon to fight back the threat of monsters. In this time much of mankind fights with one another for supremecy.

 On a battlefield long since forgotten among the corpses and the low hanging dank fog. Standing alone in this carrnage is a armor clad maiden with long silver hair. You lay before her your vision blurring. You draw ragged breath after breath. The maiden clad in her goldden armor looks at you her eyes a deep purple. She speaks softly “O' fallen warrior your fight is now over, you have earned a rest but I fear your fate has yet to play out.” you try to speak through your blood caked lips but your voice fails you. You look down at the would that has put you in this situation. A spear had peirced your armor and you caouldn't stop the bleeding with your hand so you proped your self against a tree and waited for the end when the maiden appeared before you.

 Returning your darkening gaze to the maiden she kneels and looks into your eyes “Rest warrior, the fates have a plan for you so rest while you can.” the maiden stands back up just as your vision gose black. The maiden stands holding a pale flame to her chest as she looks to the dark overcast sky. The maiden unfolds her large pair of glorious golden feathered wings “O' fates what game do you play with this warriors soul, what trails and tribulations will you make him face?” She asccends to the heavens, a single feather floats down landing on to your corpse.

For what feels like the first time in months you open your eyes. You find yourself siting on some kind of reflective surface you notice you are naked when you hear the sound of footsteps come from behind you each step causes a ripple on the surface. As you look behind you, your eyes meet a familiar set of purple eyes. The maiden greets you “Hail champion of the fates, it seem the time for you to once again walk the land has come” as she finishes three flamses flicker into existence. To your left dances a white flame behind the maiden and to your right a midnight flame burns. “What is going on here?” you ask the maiden. She responds “It would seem the fates have need of you so they have pulled you from the depths of the sea of souls” is her answer. The flames grow and change in size and shape until three woman dressed in garbs matching the flame they came from stand with their eyes blinfolded. The maiden kneels to the three blind woman. The one in the middle that stood before then maiden speeks first. “You are to be our tool to decide on the worlds path a great many choices lay before you, even we can't see which path your actions will take the world.” the woman clad in the darkeest dress speaks up “Will the future you choose be a dark one or will it be one guided by the light, but then it may just be a world free of the shackles of the gods even to me who governs the future am blind to this.” the woman dressed in white speaks “Rise battle maiden, you and the Lost soul will be sent down to the world below there you will face many strugles but fret not and know that we are always watching.” what was at once upon your awakening a still lake now looks as if you were standing in the sky.

  The three woman speak simaltaniusly. “You will now be giffted with the strength to face the trails that await you.” for a breif moment you glow gold and fell a bit stronger but not any real difference. “This power will grow as you do” says the white clad woman. The woman clad in red steps closer to you an puts her hand to your forehead. “know that we send to set this stagnant world in motion once more.” she pushes you backwards and brace for impact instictivly, but it never comes. You open your eyes to see yourself falling through the skies over a vast ocean. As you fall you see a beach on the horizon, it seems that you are pulled there. As you draw closer you notice the body of a youth laying motionless. You impact the youth and everything goes black for a moment. As you stir slowly opening your eyes a searing pain shoots through your stomach. Looking down you see that you have been impailed bye a spike of what seems to be splintered would. You try to recall how this came to be but your memory feels fuzzy. You struggle to your feet and limp over to a tree standing away from the waves your cloths soked your wet hair a tangled mess sticks to your face, as you get to the tree you lean aginst it's trunk and pull the wooden spike from your gut nearly blacking out from the pain. You sit against the tree holding your wound as to a void bleeding out. Your battered body appers to be to worn our and you pass out. As your vision begins to go dark you see a tome wash a shore, it looks to have survived the waters that just spit it out before you. You decide to check it out when you regain cousuionus. You black out. (To be continued in chapter 1-1.2)