Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-39280634-20200208011005

Oh, so all this wasn't about the primal form ? I kinda feel dumb now; I was WAY off in my assesment. So the weird forms are more a take on their mental and emotional state, huh ? And it also explains (in your universe) why Druella and the QoH are weird looking. Good concept.

Also, I'm sorry to say but the references have gone over my head :( . Either I can't remember them or I never watched them. The serum thing kinda reminds me of Blade (the half-vampire from Marvel who hunts other vampires). That's all I can think of right now.

And if this excerp is somewhere from the middle of the novel, then I don't think Nick's 'degradation' is on the nose. I mean, I'm sure you've gone with a gradual build up of his symptoms over time, which I guess it culminated in what you've described to me (I have yet to get the full story).

As for the Regeneration scene: that kinda depends. For someone who watched Doctor Who before (like me), it might be obvious. Someone who hasn't might not know what's happening, unless they guess it in their minds through sheer genre savviness. At least that's how I see it.

Edit: WAIT ! I completely forgot !

I was amazed to see that Nick can move through stoped time or something, and all I could think of was:

"You thought it was the Doctor, but it was me, the Weary !" XD