User blog comment:SPARTAN-047/Ogre Okāsan's Lesson/@comment-30895326-20170502001644

That was certainly a story.

My biggest complaint, though, would have to be the dialogue. It sounded more like "role-play" than dialogue two people would actually have.

I actually have a one-shot idea involving a stepmom Mamono. But what about a mother that's been monsterized? Hmm...