User blog comment:BTR180/Ask us anything/@comment-28144855-20160720203434/@comment-28144855-20160721155845

You are mistaking. The Original CANON goal is coexistance. It is fact, this unification is simply a way for KC to cover his mediocre writing.

Don't get me wrong, when it comes to MG profiles, KC is a maestro! The MGs feel very real, because some have traits you don't like, just like RL women, they come in diffetent shapes, sizes and forms yet each is unique. His way of putting naughty into the profiles is amazing. The Items, fruits and stuff like that is very creative, not very well thought out, yet decent. The World itself seems very interesting and it drives you to find more about it. What is the problem you ask?

THE STORY! It is like having the best ingredients for a delicacy, and then turning it into a disaster. Deus ex machina, plotholes the size of the sun, favorization of sides (why have a conflict in the first place if it is like Aro the Destroyer vs kitten) but what irks me the most is that the story is supposedly mature (porn) yet is so childishly naive it's ridiculous. I know, you'll say utopia this, utopia that, I feel like this world is really a distopya. I feel like the story treats me like a mongoloid child, who need to be held by the hand and told who is bad and who is not forming an oppinion in my staid and failing, somethimes blattantly picturing good guys as Villains yet no one seems to care (Druella cursing books, sound like antrax letters to me.) Yet due to her tits (they look saggy btw) she gets a pass. The story is dealing with mature content, but is not mature in the least, it is infantile and mediocre. The Order and CG are all onedimensional villains yet "the good guys" genocides races and not a word, monsterize the unwilling, conquering land (only "good guys" did it in the story lol)The story is biased and is presented to the reader like a bandwagon Mamono=good, Humans=bad, there are more shades of grey than the simple black and white kid story in MGE. I won't lie, if I lived in a Mamono filled world I'd fight to kill them, no matter in how many pieces my heart would break. People need to start thinking objectively, putting everything on a scale and then forming an oppinion, not folowing what the masses say like the lemmings. Sorry for the ranty wall of text, but I really feel the story(trainwreck) should have been left out. It feels more like a bad fan fiction than a story anyways. The selling point are the MGs, take that away, and you'd be left with a steaming pile of horseshit.

I feel like the story is