User blog comment:Hakaishin Aro/Lost Sister/@comment-30014014-20171126233712/@comment-28144855-20171126234843

Indeed. I kind of agree I should made a smoother transition. I'm still making corrections so that will definitely get ironed in the process. There is about 400-500 more words in the first chapter, but as I slightly edited the first part, some minor things need to be changed as well in the following part too.