Thread:LorialetDreamer/@comment-37028137-20200307192347/@comment-32042142-20200310182516

Thank you for your time.

Don't worry, I didn't missed the last sentence of the lilim. ^^"

For the rest, I guess it make sense, however, I want to point out that for the aura, even if it make sense, I personnaly find it really harmful for the narration to have the character being able to instantly identify who is goos and who is bad. Of course it all depend of what you do with it in the future, so I will probably read some followings chapters before judging any further.