Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-35836714-20190520180645/@comment-39447614-20190521214126

Thank you for your honesty, Freestyler. I'll try to take your advice and try to improve my dialogue. I think I'll continue now, and try not to make it as long XD

Previously...

"Well, we're doomed."

"Quit yor beetchin Mr.Mc Edgy, you got yourself into this mess, now you face da consequences."

"I hope you all have trained to have your pelvises broken."

"S-shoot her! SHOOT HER!!!!!!!!!"

Now....

In the midst of the chaos that was currently happening on the wall, a loud metallic clang could be heard through the screams of panic and moans of pleasure. Steel vs steel.

I slide back after the collision with the Salamander and her flaming sword.

"Damn, I didn't think that I would ever encounter a Salamander. It's a good thing I trained with the spear during my time preparing for this. Otherwise I wouldn't stand a chance!" I thought to myself as I regained my composure, while watching Salamander do the same.

"Heh, you're actually pretty good. Most men that clash with me can barely even stand afterwards. You seem to have something...unique...about you." The Salamander compliments me as she also regains her composure.

"Yea. I trained myself for this. So I can go back and show those fools that I could hold my own against your kind. And to show them, just how wrong they were for convicting me!!" I yell as I once again rush towards the mamono, spear at the ready.

She must've already saw it coming, as right before my feet left the ground, she was already behind me, ready to swing her sword. It felt like time had stopped, before I swiftly swung around and block the blow with the side of my spear.

"Oooh, not bad...but can you handle...THIS?!" She yelled as her tail wrapped around my legs and pulled me down to the ground. Her sword still burning against my spear, slowly burning through it.

"Shit!" I exclaim as I try my best to keep my guard up. One slip, and its all over. But then, I suddenly hear the frantic screams of several fellow soldiers. Looking around, I discover a shocking sight.

The Harpies were flying into and pushing soldiers off of the wall, into the jaws of dea-...pleasure below. How terrible!

"Well well, doesn't look like your friends are doing so hot. Just like you, Zavy-wavy." The Salamander teased me as she looked me dead in the eyes, hers filled with lust and excitement.

"....H-how do you know my nickname?! Answer me!" I demand as I looked up her with confusion and fear.

"Thought I already told you. I know everything about you~" She panted, as her sword pressed even harder against my trusty spear, burning through it at a faster pace. She was starting to really get into this now.

I do my best to try wiggle and struggle out of her tail's grip around my legs. But it wouldn't budge. Damn, and I thought a Lamia's grip was bad.

Majority of the soldiers were gone now, and only a few remained. This was a total failure.

"Come on, are you gonna give up this easily? I want to see that flame of yours! Don't let me down...Zavy-wavy." She teased as she pressed her flaming sword even harder against my already melting spear.

"If that's the case, then FINE!" I yell as I bash her sword out of my face with the side of my spear, cutting it into halves. Well fuck.

This startled the Salamander however, as the sudden movement made her stumble and loosen her tail's grip on my legs. But when she looked up to realize what happened, whoo boy.

"My my, it seems that your poor little spear is broken. I guess this means, I win~" She sneered at me while chuckling.

"Yea, I guess you do." I responded while looking down at the burnt and broken pieces of what used to be my spear. I was very disappointed in myself.

"Zavy-wavy...." The Salamander whispered as she approached me slowly.

"Just, please be gentle with me." I mutter as I slowly back away. I have no where to run, nothing to defend myself with, and my allies are gone. Maybe it was meant to end this way.

End

Alright Freestyler, I'm sorry for making another lengthy one. But I do hope I did a bit of a better job this time. Let me know what you think when you get a chance. I would've posted this earlier, but when I posted it, it didn't go through.