User blog comment:VictressAgilis/What Do You Want?/@comment-25808351-20151029185114

Rexir2 has very good points. Along with all that, if you write any adventuring stories with an adventurer who's single or with his Mamono wife, don't be afraid to throw some dangerous situations in the story. Part of what makes a good story are trials your main characters face. Keeps the reader drawn in and it's also a good way to get the reader to understand the characters better (how they deal with situations, problems, conflicts, etc). Just keep those situations PG-13, otherwise you will invoke the wrath of the mods. (Party Vanderbilt is watching)

But that's only if you're planning on writing an adventure story or two. Regardless, I was unaware you had written any fan-fics. Starting now, I'll keep my eyes open for your future work.