User blog comment:DarkTreeant/The 18 Inch Curse: Prologue/@comment-33574379-20150119054452/@comment-25808351-20150120045124

Very well done, that was extremely improved from what it was before. In regards to your earlier comment. I think you should go straight into Sten's journey. Where's he heading or maybe he doesn't know exactly where yet. If he doesn't, maybe he meets another of your OC's that gives him an idea or he hears a rumor that gives him some direction.