User blog comment:The Reptile King/The Reptile Kingdom/@comment-30115223-20161014001722/@comment-27950421-20161014005432

Ok first off read other people's work, especially official mamono, there's a reason why Kenkou Cross's work took off like it did and it isn't because of his art. Don't just look at what they said, but how they said. Figure out what they did when putting the words together and why they did it. Once you have a solid understanding on the structure of the words and the way they use the language, your ready to start figuring out how you want to word your stuff and how you want to use the language on your profiles.

Second, you need to understand exactly what information you want to give. What role do you want your mamono to play in the world around it? What kind of temperament does this mamono have? Ect. You want to keep in mind that you aren't making an individual person, but an entire race. That means you want to give detailed information on the race, but at the same time leave it open for there to be individuality within those races. You want the races to have personality but you also want to leave room for the members of those races to have a personality within the races personality. Nearly every mamono is also based off of something else, be it a real life animal, mythic beast or even household objects. You want to understand that subject inside and out. Know everything there is to know about what you're basing your mamono off of and figure out how to mamonoize those traits.

Third Organize that information, figure out how to organize the information you've made on your mamono. If you pay attention to the way I wrote my stuff, you'll see that I have the information on the mamono sectioned out and I usually follow a similar formula with each one. You'll also see that I use information from earlier sections to lay the foundation for later paragraphs and I use information from later paragraphs to support what was said in earlier paragraphs. Everything is sectioned out and organized, but at the same time, everything is connected.

After that it's just a matter of writing. Which can be it's own challenge but as long as you follow those three tips, you should make a pretty good profile.