Thread:AngryLance/@comment-28144855-20190915035744/@comment-28144855-20200406192748

As for the Black Lotus, the concept is quite good, however, they sound like your tipical tyrant. Violence breed violence and it never ends. That should be worked on a bit more. I don't know about the others, but my characters, Mamono included who grew in power and knowledge can't interfere with the MGE or any world in the mortal realm, so the Black Lotus going after any Emmerian would be an act of war and that would not be what you made them to be.

Also, I call dibs on the Demon girl!