Thread:LightningS9/@comment-32475031-20170706003915/@comment-28358106-20170719025514

(So we have an intro for a new guy. Not bad, you gave him a pretty thorough background as a starter, which is good.  But, Astromo could've given only a handful of details about himself and left the rest to be discovered later.  It gives a character some mystery and also allows other OCs to get to know them.  Think about it---a mysterious new guy is more intriguing to the ladies, and they might get curious about him and ask questions!  This kind of interaction allows you to think up new things that you might not have before, because someone else is asking questions you might not have considered, making for more fun all around.  And, one last thing: when introducing new characters, when in doubt, check with the host ahead of time to see if bringing in a new character is okay.  Most of the time it will be, but it's just a common courtesy.  Doc out.)