Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-37028137-20200326010749

Greetings Lance,

I do hope you are staying safe what with the state of things nowadays.

I'm hoping to procure your help once more in reading over a piece of the newest chapter I've been toiling away on. It's part of Chapter 29, and Vellantha and Nicholas are revealing deep secrets about their pasts to each other to clear the air, so to speak.

I actually haven't finished Nicholas' part yet. (It's giving me trouble, on how much I let the reader know about his childhood.) In any case I was hoping when I do finish it sometime later in the week that you might take a look at it if you're so inclined. Check out the general quality, the themes, and such.

Your feedback is helping a great deal so I'm always anxious for more, let me know and I'll send it when I've finished.

Cheers,

The Weary TimeLord.