User blog comment:JeielYozama/Fan-Made Mamono Realms - OZ (Premediate)/@comment-24851346-20160823200145

First of all, I like the idea of Oz being a realm in the world, with it's own cast of Monster Girls. However, I think it would have worked better as being in a seperate dimension, akin to Wonderland. Also like Wonderland, I might have made the leaders Lilim, to better tie Oz to the main setting.

Also, I think it might have been better to deliver the information more in the style of an encyclopedia, given that's technically what the major setting is. Detached, formal, and matter of fact. As well, divide some of the information to make it more coherent. Have the Emerald City form its own section, with the four quadrants also forming their own quadrants.