Thread:Flodoomable/@comment-25566645-20141022234416/@comment-5426290-20141024111809

(Regarding your comment on the chimera 'pseudo-What do')

It was smart of you to explain to the chimaera why she was wrong instead of just attacking her.

"The dead tell no tales" You are a braver man than me to threaten a pissed-off walking demented flamethrower with multi-persona disorder.

You forgot the fact that the story teller defined the chimera as your wife.

You forgot that the setting was in the 21st century. "mini-chainsaw"

"I gave an annoyed spit to the ground at her feet." That's kinda mean.

"only silence answered, it's speaker the open air the creature once occupied." This sentence needs revising.

On a general base your reaction was very interesting and by no means bad, it just had a few mishaps that can easily be overlooked.

(Regarding my story you read)

Thank you, I'm happy to see that you enjoyed it.

(Regarding what languages I speak)

Dutch (native, mastered) (The Netherlands)

American/British English (primary, mastered apart from grammar errors) (

German (listening, reading and speaking. No writing though.)

French (listening and reading only. No speaking or writing)