User blog comment:MetalRonin0/An unexpected summoning Part1/@comment-43782881-20201007185321

This seems like a good start. While I noticed a number of grammatical errors, there was nothing that made it difficult to read. Because this site has no form of spellcheck, I prefer to type in google docs, (alternartives exist) which will catch most of your errors (I think the main thing I noticed was that some of your verbs were written in the wrong tense, like a present-tense verb that should have been a past tense).

However, your descriptive writing was nice to read, giving me a visual of scenes, a nice variety of vocabulary, some things which I feel I struggle with. I also felt the dialogue sounded natural.

And I mean this last comment to sound like a compliment, I generally stray away from storied with monsters that I don't like, but I would be interested to see if you had more to this story.