User blog comment:The Reptile King/Reptile Kingdom What Do's/@comment-27950421-20180211160339/@comment-30014014-20180216154223

I think it's decent enough. Though you shouldn't be afraid of expanding a little bit, show the intricate dichotomy between the merchant's unrelenting greed and pettyness despite his stature in this sea of literal morphic monsters and this quite towering snake of a woman's delicate touch toward those she may( due to size) consider smaller or frail compared to herself.

That would make for an interesting, albeit somewhat cliché story of the human being a total scumbag and the monster being the polar opposite. A way to speak of this would be to describe the action rather than simply tell. Trust me, that stuff works.

Well, assuming ytou're willing to take word from a clown with the dental merit or someone who brushes his teeth with a candy cane every morning.