User blog comment:Sp1ku/Contest Entree/@comment-26546400-20160206183322

Someone has to point it out lest we forget but please do some spell checking and create paragraphs I know it gets annoying without word, but it isn't a good enough excuse for some of the faults. Other than that pretty nice story a little rushed in some areas and the Ryu is quite flawed as a basic functioning character with the whole confessing love even though he just said he loved someone else. Still though it was a nice read.