Thread:Mauller/@comment-28718853-20161119231932/@comment-25113070-20161121140242

Conflict is fine in a story, you can go into detail about battles but don't go into detail when it comes to gore.

So talking about getting cuts, scratches or getting stabbed is fine. bruises from being hit etc, losing an arm. but dont go into detail about it.

So saying he was slashed across his stomach etc is fine, but don't say his intestines spilled out to the floor etc.