User blog:Unstaible child/failed chapter

Ok guys this is my first story on here and though English is my first language in tongue on paper or on net you'll find its my 2nd. this is a short story of a boy roughly 10 (no loli scenes) who works as a farmers son. in the monster girl theme. as for H scenes i,m putting that of till another story ill do ill make the story fit so as a H scene could happen you get to use you're imagination and fap to that. so without further adue here's my teenage dream...i mean nightmare. all rights belong to there respective owners and all other legalease bull crap i"m doing this just for fun made by [//monstergirlencyclopedia.wikia.com/wiki/User:Unstaible_child http://monstergirlencyclopedia.wikia.com/wiki/User:Unstaible_child]

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Its early morning and the sun has not yet fully rised. My father, a man who had worked as a farmer since childhood like me is now nearing his 40th year I may be only 10 but i'm his son aparantly he waited a while before he settled and had his own family. thouh his life is boring he was there for me growing up a rare chance these days as men are taken by monsters all the time. "cmon son another day" i herd from the creaky wooden door at the end of my room"just give me a minuet will you "i got up got dressed "ill give you half a minuet " the gruth voice came from downstars.

he stood there by the door hoe and seeds in his hands ."here go finish of the plowing and then after dinner start planting those seeds. i grabbed then as i opened the door he shoved a old dinted metal tin in my face. " want some" "no id better leave it to you you know the barn and all" "true he said he pourd a small amount from a crudely made glass bottle into the cup and dank it. then he put them on the table and stomed out the door heading to the barn 30 feet away from the house. "all right youd better behave youreselves today " as he unlocked the fence door.

the fence newly buit was 5 ft high and sturdy as hell our sweat and blood went into building that chopping tees carting it back by hand shaping it then banging it into the ground .he then proceeded to open the barn door. " see ya dad "i yelled as i walked in the other direction hoe over my shouldiers in one hand and the other flaiying around as i fail at walking smoothly over the rugged hard bumby soil .i came .to a small post 2 feet tall with the words engraved on it (johnys patch) "aagh" i kick it doing nothing to the post .but aparantly wood hurts if you hit it with youre leg and amaizingly not. spared me the laws of phisics this time and gave me a nasty lim to my right ankle. "haha hahahaah youre dead johny " i walk on a few feet maybe 60 feet from the house is a larger post done up with old ragged clothes hat and stones for eyes but what really gives it a scary look is the smile the tear in its cloth gives it and flayking wood from the tip giving it teeth.

"hey howe ya doing ". i call out to the scarecrow as i walk to it. "watching the house thats good .pssst listen its my dads birthday soon was thinking of getting this girl whos in town to go out with him "......"well im sure shes his age i mean ...shese coverd in wrinkles on her face . but hey my dad is too " ....."well see ya lateri gotta work .i walk on to see a flat patch over this bumpy hilly muddy hard soil ."lets get to work.

a few hours pass and all the tilling is done i slap the hoe over my shoulder and look up the sun is standing tall in the clear blue sky .i walk on coverd from head to toe in mud sweat and a nackerd right anke id best not tell my dad about. over the hilly hard soil past the scarcrow another kick to (johny) and back to the house i put the hoe there and headed to the barn.

"dad daaaaad! you ther".... no answer? "daaad daaaaaadcmon im hungry as hell " as i opened the fenced door and head towards the barn. i noticed the door is just open letting a small shiver of light into the barn "daad if youve been slackim im gunna agghh aghh aaaaaaggghhh! " in front of me lies my dad on the floor ravaished my a holistarus "get it of me son" i look for something thinking my dad is under atack i grap some wood get behind it and with it i get its neck in a chocke hold. "had enough yet!?" i yell pulling tighter i pull her up and backwards as i fell she fell on me forcing the wind out my lungs "oooth " i yell "hold on it son" my dad yells as he gets his clothes back on and a good few gasps of air .his hands and legs shaking. "dad you didn't did you?"i loosen my grip at the thought of it "ooOH husband " the holstarus yells. "that was sweet husband, " my dad turns lifts his left foot and kicks the side of its face ."shut up you bitch son whats its tag number?" looking at the tag by her neck i see a number "hmm its the same as last its that 69 one dad "

"aaaagh darlings sweet stuff is in me " the holstarus starts singing waving her head side to side "ahh soon ill have you're baby I cant waiiit!!. lets do it again lets mmMMMOOOOove together again darling ."me toooOOOO i want darlings sweet stuff too" no me i want you're baby as well i wWWWAAAAAnt it mmMMOOOore " "cmon son ill put her back you go back to the house its riling them all up". "well its just like you said dad " "what?" "don't ever give a free show in public ahhah ahhaa haha . but serious HURRY up i'm starving!"

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well here's chapter 1 how you like it after reading a few fan stories its mostly around sex exo building sex eating and sex so id like to cainge it up a bit by (adding) drama comedy psychology and character.

but if you want to see more than hers what you gonna have to do i want you guys to provide the plot think of thinks to make a story out of this one and suggest it in the comments anything good and ill do it i'm looking for things like. will something (worse) happen to dad will a big adventure come round the corner is he scarecrow just the boys way to escape reality or is it actually a new scarecrow monster ? who is johny? and whats the boys name who is the old lady in the city? ect so plz looking forward togood sudjestions also critisism hate maile is welcome but no point as it will not affect the story (or grammer ) this story made my unstable child