User blog comment:UnbalancedSpoon/Healing Grace (Harem): Pilot/@comment-30700719-20181212215737

Spelling and grammar: Excellent

Punctuation: Some places could use more, but generally excellent

Pacing: Good

Vocabulary: Good

Use of tense: Excellent

Hey, I'm not very productive when I write stuff, but I've done some (read: one) and I think I know a good writer when I see one.

UnbalancedSpoon, go ahead. Do another. You're too good.