User blog comment:BTR180/X-Periment Z/Lilim/@comment-39280634-20200512124355

Huh, interesting story. While it does have that tinge of 'edge', honestly it's nowhere near as bad as I imagined (given that it was one of your earliest works) and it's pretty tastefuly done.

Nothing wrong about a realistic depiction of how first contact with a Mamono would go like (especialy with someone as 'feral' as the MC). Of course, it looked weird for the MC since the Lilim didn't exactly eased him into it (how about talk to him more instead of forcing french-kisses on him; I guess this is the "edgy" part). Although, if he finds the new world "sickening", then I doubt he would've liked the old world...

His "memories" from the views of other people seem a bit murky (likely clouded by fear and confusion) andit's cool that he seems to have a bit of morality (feeling bad for the Kiki and not getting involved with any side) and not attacking to kill Mamonos on sight. Not choosing sides and living by himself is fine, just hope he realises that Mamonos aren't so bad.

Two things I don't understand:

1) The transition from "you are the MC" to "I am the MC" is kinda confusing (I guess an early writing error).

2) The "X-Periment Z" name; it seems to be the name of a user who isn't here anymore, so was this some sort of colab ?