User blog comment:UnbalancedSpoon/Healing Grace (Harem): Pilot/@comment-37523810-20181212030746/@comment-25808351-20181212033218

Nah, not bad for your pilot of this series. You did a good job with the descriptions. At all times I knew what was happening without breaking that rule barrier. I liked the writing but I can’t say much more than that, because there isn’t much else. BUT HEY! That’s the point of this pilot.

You gave us the context we needed at this time, and you’ll expand upon characters and the story (who, what, when, where, why) later.

In conclusion I liked this and I liked to see more. I don’t see the mods having issues with this series if you keep this level of writing. Good job UnbalancedSpoon!