Talk:Hinezumi/@comment-25817038-20160118054419/@comment-26115871-20160118063707

. . . This is just an IDEA you want to add to your story? It's practically a story all of its own! Well, as far as a general opinion goes, I think it definitely has a lot of potential.

I gotta say though, the 'genetically improved and from a more advanced world MC' part kind of irks me. . . I mean, since this is only an idea you want to add to an overall plot I'm assuming there must be more to the story, but unless there's some huge plot point that revolves around his past, it seems a bit out of the blue. I guess what I'm asking is. . . why does he have to be genetically improved and from a more advanced world?