User blog comment:Knuckles213/An Adventurer’s Folly – Enter the Jubjub/@comment-26546400-20151119052023/@comment-27073023-20151119065434

Some of the vulgarity was actually planned, it was more like me talking to the reader, telling you a story that actually happen the the other day vs a story you would read form a book. Thanks for the feedback, I appreaciate it. I'll try a different approach next time and tone some things down and refine my one-shots better.