Talk:Parasite Slime / Slime Carrier/@comment-26376061-20170121053033/@comment-29564364-20170123215251

Alpha: I would have realized what's going on as soon as I would have scanned the pink liquid in her hair and identified it as slime, but whatever. I project a photonic barrier between us to prevent any progress towards me and I clearly tell her that I don't want to get involve in a love relationship and that she should start searching for another man, but that I'm willing to remain friends.

I think you're missing a bit ot tact, here.

Alpha: Okay then. I create a duplicate and push him into her embrace before turning intangible and escape by sinking into the ground. Is this better?

This is even worse!

Alpha: You are the one doing the narration anyway, so don't blame me for what you write.