User blog comment:Samuel Cheshire/Samuel's Folly (Lamia)/@comment-26295607-20150910011312/@comment-26419174-20151004011646

Actually, after re-reading this once again, I do have a minor complaint. Several times in the text there are references to things the character can not possibly know. The ones I have noticed are to Darwinism(when he is weighting his options) and styrofoam(5th paragraph from the end). Those references are rather out of place and I do believe that chaging them to something more period appropriate would make this fic even better.