User blog comment:MockingJester/Shelter for the mute/@comment-32042142-20181114182410

Very very good story, I'm not even suprised with you. ^^

2 little things :

- After he find her, did she wake up only 3 days after? Or it is a mistake, because it jumped to day 1 to day 4.

- I really like romance and all, but 450 days before finally having sex with the MC? Even for a human it would be A LOT. At first I thought she had some kind of trauma with sex due to her 'ex-boyfriend', but at the end it's revealed she was in fact virgin... That really surprising that her ex, who seem to be a perfect douchebag, dind't do anything to her, and it failed to justify why she take so long to jump to the act. As I say, I really like the romantic aspects, but on this one, I have to admit it may be a bit too much maybe?