Thread:Xmodius/@comment-24511976-20160508003504/@comment-28166070-20160508034922

Okay, it sounds like this could be something big. Its great that they'll earn husbands, but that's not their motivating goal. How will the husbands be involved other than "supply"? ;-)

This sounds like it has potential, but your first story I think will need to be the prologue of sorts, explaining how the protagonists get together and then you can lead into their first adventure.