User blog comment:Terror1200/MGE Short Story Series - Hellhound/@comment-25574135-20150114060358

I liked it. Very few grammatical errors, but overall very good.

Just as a side note the Hellound`s assertive/dominating nature seemed a little subdued to what I picked up in the profile reading imho. But that is all up to the authors creativity. Keep up the good work! (--)b