User blog comment:Breakaway Republic/Two Steps From Hellhound- The Hellhound's Indecent Proposal/@comment-26546400-20151104124327

Going to be a bit of an arse here and this is only in my preference the word waifu when used in a story like this, that fills out a lot of character detail and has them speaking for a while in a certain way to only then throw "waifu" in the middle of it caused me to cringe a little. This is likely to only be me but I thought I might throw it out there. Otherthan that it is a very nice story.