Talk:Demon Lord/@comment-1636709-20200116160745/@comment-88.9.134.204-20200117004727

" I guess the setting is rather cheap and Lilith seems Mary Sue-ish... but would it still be MGE if we crank up the drama and tragedy ? Sure, it would start to look more appealing... but it would probably cease to be the 'safe haven' it was meant to be. Say what you will about me, but to be honest, that's one thing I liked about it."

KC didn't need to crank up the drama and tragedy... just keep it simpler: No cosmic conflict, no jerkass Chief Goddess trying to turn the mamono back into murdering beasts, no monsterization of women (with a few exceptions), no mind-warping of men, no danger of extinction of the human species (or at least of women...).

Just say "the Demon Lord" has turned all monsters into girls and they all want your dick". Period.

I also would like it if he had given the girls a little bit more flexibility... the late sourcebooks make them look too similar among themselvers for my taste...