Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-28718853-20160616153604/@comment-31080309-20191023235412

LorialetDreamer wrote: I really need to stop to come this website.

@Ricard Zhao, I am not going to comment on the manticore first part, the behaviour of the Manticore was really cold and almost cruel, bbut I guess it's ok, but I couldn't continue to read after the part where the cheshyre use paint to make the main character rape others mamono.

Whats the hell do you exepct me to feel except hate and disgust for this character? But it's ok since none of them get pregnant right? And the MC like her and her cheerfull attitude, she just made you rape random girl in the past but it's ok.... What a load of shit... -_-

EDIT : And everybody except me just love it, what a fucking joke... Well, I guess that this kind of story would have some faults in it. I’ll admit, I’m surprised that considering your critical tone in the message, you had a few complaints about the next three endings. Although I would like to tell you that I don’t agree with what you said, and I’ll explain why clearly.

First of all, Celia the Manticore is not as cruel and cold as you think. As I wrote at the end of the statement, Celia is more of a sympathetic character. She’s aware of her instinct of feeding off the fear of males, and she’s only able to control it as well as a person would with a minor addiction: She’s fairly acceptable about it, although she tries her best not to ruin others for that need of fear to nourish her. You notice that within her section, she sympathises with Richard’s fears, and tries her best to calm him down, managing to succeed to a degree, since Richard lets the punishment proceed, a lot calmer than he was before. And one of the first paragraphs of the section states that she only cruelly punished those who severely offended her or disrupted her classes in a unforgivable manner, and that Richard knows Celia well enough to know that she’s more kind than most other students would see her as. Now that I said my part, I’ll say that you might have interpreted the section in your own way, which resulted in your opinion of her character. I ask that you consider what I have said, although I won’t blame you if you still believe that my writing made her seem like she’s cold and subtly sadistic, this is only the first of the few stories I done on the site.

Now onto Sara herself. I know what I wrote, which is the fact that she made Richard go on a raping spree around the school, before he was knocked out of his trance forcefully, before he could make things worse. Of course, no-one would like a person who is responsible for inciting a depraved act onto Richard, which is why she’s deserving of a fair amount of hate and disgust for being remorseless about the whole situation, right?

However, I will take that as a mistake on my part, because I lacked context on the whole incident, although please note that it was ‘one time’, written in the full sense that it was only a once-off incident. And it should be no wonder why it is. So I’ll explain the situation between Sara and Richard during the aftermath of the situation.

Sara was actually shocked about the fact that she actually meant to use a much more milder version of her ‘special’ paint, just enough to leave Richard slightly horny for the rest of the day. However, her own carefree attitude turned out to be her undoing, as she accidentally used the ‘full-dose’ version of the paint, which caused the incident. After Richard had recovered, Sara personally gave Richard an apology, and states that she has been banned from ever using her ‘special’ paint in class again, along with a chewing-out from Principal Deryaka aimed solely at her. Richard actually scolded his own teacher for letting him do that, but also states that he fully accepts her apology, because he knows that she never intended for this to happen and was overly remorseful about it. So in short, it dampened their relations slightly, but time slowly repaired it, as they slowly forgot about the whole incident itself.

If that context won’t persuade you to see her in a better light, then I don’t know what will. I made Sara to be a slightly energetic and cheerful teacher, not a crazed and manipulative woman. So I’m sorry if her character offended you.

Considering that you have no complaints about Yaraka the Ogre’s segment, I assume that you find her ending to be quite enjoyable, right?

Anyway, I hope that you consider what I have said, and thanks for the criticism, since it shows the problems I have when I generally write stories in this fandom.