Board Thread:Fan-made Monsters/@comment-26517142-20160822162217

''Okaay minna-san! The Naether hype is definitely in as of now, and so far I've done a fair amount of Mamono in a short span o time. But! I'm gonna note Oz is far from over since I have requests to make still. I'll  continue on the Naetherkin until I break. So, we have the Slender in its oddness. The Chagrin with its smiling madness. All we need now is... a deathly mistress. One with freaking clawed action. Pop in on Naether realm's odds and ends when you get a chance, and meet:''

Raker

Family: Ghoul 

Type: Undead x Demihuman

Habitat: Naether forests and caverns, abandoned facilities 

Disposition: Selfish, cowardly, malicious

Diet: Carnivorous; will seek game no matter how big or small, mana of human men

''Jeiel's Comment: That's nice. She has claws the size of my head. If you're going to approach her, please wear some kind of suit of armor. No wait... just don't wear that. If she shreds, she shreds.''

Ghostly and inherently horrific at first glance, the Raker is a combination of monstrified beauty and grace. They have comparable similarity to the main specie, save for the strong-willed trait that credits their ferocity. A common Raker has pale Caucasian skin, dotted splotches of red on their thin bodies, and ethereal white hair. They also possess a manic set of curved claws (hence their name), which are used mainly to hunt prey. A skilled Raker can do as much as dice a metal girder into fragments, and if not careful, can lacerate human skin. Additionally, some have been said to have claws able to rend the divide of planes.

In ages past, these Mamonos were created as farmhands to assist in tilling Oz' verdant fields, in the same way Slenders were chosen as caretakers. Circe had them expunged from the land above merely because their claws were too much 'in the way'. As a result of their complete removal from the sun, they developed a paranoia around light. The DE they release as sweat dissipates in their skin under the influence of light, leaving them in a rapture until it drives them sexually rabid (and unable to discern anything they do similar to drunkenness ). This is why they snuff out any light source and prefer to venture at night.

From the beginning, it has been found Slenders and Rakers have an ill-reputed rivalry between their species. Rakers have a penchant to rape men Slenders choose as mates. There are even instances they hijack a Slender's teleportation ability to jump into the outside realms. Should a person end up a Slender's man, either he becomes stalked by a Raker, the two Mamonos continuously bicker over sexual privileges with him, or none of the above. There is one similarity between them though - their isolation from other Mamono species, including their own.

Using their claws and nimble built that makes them nearly 'ghostly' in movement, Rakers hunt wild game twice their size. Their quick movements do well in catching prey, but like Ghouls, they also seek the spiritual energy of men. Curiosity opts them to stalk villages, waiting for unsuspecting victims. Once they have a target in their sights, they don't attack him right off the bat. They fear direct confrontation, so they stalk him every night, drawing nearer without his prior knowledge. The man will then notice a presence trying to make itself known and flee (but should he not, the Raker will remain hidden until the man himself seeks to call her out). This is a big mistake: Rakers take fleeing as an invitation to milk him.

The Raker will, with utmost glee, skid its claw maniacally against the bare earth and pin him down. As one hand digs into the ground to prevent her from being yanked off, she proceeds to shred every piece of his clothing to assault him. Their malicious nature manifests the minute they lay eyes on a man's bare body. They suck his organ using their mouths (this they use to taste the man) and afterwards, initiate sex, beating hard onto the man's penis,  seeking his semen. Their timid personas turn ferocious as the the white liquid splotches across their skin. Harder and harder will they drive their orifices on his sex, up to the point he breaks.

The feeling of a Raker sucking on a man's penis is what makes up for their inability to remove their claws. Men who experience this are more likely to beg for this, and the Raker will rape him on the spot. Semen will flow the minute their lips touch the surface of their member, staining their skin and unlocking their frenzy once more.

Rakers are immensely possessive. They want no other being to come close to the men they fancy -especially their husbands. They symbollicaly leave warnings, such as claw marks or destroyed property, to incite fear. Anyone else who ignores their warning, they wound them with their claws. From the open gash, black energy is emitted, forming into the Word : incoherent scribbles that crawl up the person. If the Raker inflicts a wound on a woman, she would be afflicted by the curse until she becomes a maddened, newborn Raker with ferocity twice the normal one. If it were a man, however, he would be engulfed in black, ripened SE, attracting Naetherkin around him like a beacon.

Tales of the Raker have also scaled in Oz. It is an old hallowed legend wherein they call them simply 'The Rake', who attacks in the middle of the night, bringing death with them. This must have been made at testable, since in the next day, a house is in shambles and a man is nowhere to be found.

''Raker done finally! Tell me what you think! Sorry.. been busy this time. Hope to see ya all next time!'' 