User blog comment:Altenativefuturefan27/Help Developing a Fic/Need Ideas?/@comment-25601391-20141218170933

Well I writing my first Fun fic as well and I'm already at chapert 4 so I help you a bit. First make up you're mind and pick up sertain situations that you think is epic or importaint this will be you're milestone. You yust have to fill up the parts between them.As for that yust think abouth stuff anithing and when you think you have one that is good than flesh it out. As for motivation for the Succubus. I think in route 2 she has good enough motivation. She picks up the helmat or (other part of the aromure) and sarching for the person who owns it. You can make this story work in two ways.

1. You focuse on the Succubus. You write down her yourney until they met. While she is travelling she hear stories abouth this guy (Like he is a legend or something).

2. You write the story simultaneously. 1 for Guts and 1 ofr the Succubus. This one is harder because you have to make sure that both of them get enough time for developement. But you can meke the story more colorefull this way Guts(sirious story) Succubus(silly/funny parts)

But you must make 1 thing sure! When the meat it must have an impact on the reader (romantic/Silly).

And fimaly. No you don't have to put those kid of stuff in you're story if you don't want to.