User blog comment:Dragon´s Blade/MGE Adventure Tales (Roleplay)/@comment-24884345-20140703204905/@comment-24884345-20140703205342

Second: I think your appearance is a bit to overdone. Just a simple (on my behalf) Metal Armour (black) a Helmet (like normal Knight have it to) and a Sword are enough. The black colour can remain of course.

Also you should add your Characters appearance aside from the armour (eye colour, hair, etc.).

About your Biography i have no concerns.