Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-33426474-20171214172321/@comment-32042142-20171214205013

Not an actual reply, but I just want to point out a little thing who disturb me.

You say that the character think monster look like man eating monster, but mermaid look like beatiful human with a fish tail in the first place.

So I was wondering if you choose a monster where the main character can't see the contrast between what he know about monster, and what they really are?

Because I suspect you to trying to create doubt in the decision of the main character by discorvering the appearance of a monster, but in this configuration, it's not really working since the meramid appearance is nothing really surprising.

Anyway, it's a godd scenario, I'm looking forward reply.