Thread:Lionrunner/@comment-37028137-20200609203807/@comment-37028137-20200610182112

Greetings Lion,

Apologies for the late reply, I had an exceptionally long day. If you don't mind I'll name each of the characters in a list with their species noted and I'll include their physical discription from my novel.

Doctor Nicholas Hawthorn (Time Lord.-- Rank Captain of the UMS Saberhagen SCN 2070, Head of the Mamono Army Medical Corps.)

Now that I could have a better look at him in detail instead of the rush of battle; I memorized every detail of his form. Studying him straight on I could see he had a lithe, frame and musculature. He wore an eggshell white dress shirt and a golden-yellow necktie under a dark black suit coat with a pair of matching trousers. A long grey overcoat was pulled about his shoulders and billowed downwards towards the floor. Judging from his posture I’d say he stood at 6’4. He had a healthy light pink skin tone and was brimming with energy. His hair was a shiny black, which was ruffled and messy. On most people I would say that look would be something to be worked for, and yet on him it looked natural and flawless. His cheek bones were firm and straight, while his chin was prominent and round. Scruff covered his chin and neck as in such a way that highlighted his jawline; though I assumed he was more often than not clean shaven due to the wiriness and unkempt state it was in. His nose was long and slightly flat and it was certainly crooked as if it had been broken several times; though this only added to his character. The one feature which stood out to me the most however was his eyes. They were a deep bright cobalt blue and they danced and sparkled as he looked about the room.

Vellantha (Lilim--Rank Supreme Admiral of the Mamono Armed Forces.)

I actually don't have a loquacious write up on Vellantha's features since she's going to transform into another body once her Dissociative Identity Disorder is resolved and her two personalities merge into a stable construct. And I haven't written that chapter yet. But that's another story. See what I mean about be long winded?

Vellantha's final form is 7ft tall, has light blue skin, long silver-white hair, red eyes with grey sclera, long dark black horns, and green tinted chiropteran wings, and a long white tail. I based the end design off of a picture I retextured it's something called a Draenei. I have no idea what that is though so -shrugs-

Here's the colorized picture I used for Vellantha in my Role Play, gives you a bit of an idea.

Reridon (Human, Incubized, Lieutenant and the Saberhagen’s Helmsman, as well as the Communications Officer.)

Now that we were in calmer surroundings I had a chance to really get a good look at the group when they weren’t in the midst of a crisis. Reridon was dressed in a dark juniper colored button up shirt, a carob toned blazer and dress trousers, and umber loafers. He stood at 5’10 by my estimation; with a lithe and lanky structure and lightly tanned caramel skin. Short auburn hair framed his face on either side. Thoughtful charcoal eyes brought focus to his face while a sharp prominent nose gave him a striking profile.

Callia ( Lamia--Rank Commander, First Officer and Tactical Specialist onboard the UMS Saberhagen.)

His wife Callia was taller than he was at about 6ft upright, though I assumed her height could vary based on how she positioned her long snake like body. She was wearing a long flowing turquoise evening dress which showed of her milky white skin and complimented her teal scaled serpentine lower half. Dark flowing hair fell about her shoulders and large almond brown eyes gave her a gentle, kindly look.

Wendalia (Wight-- Rank, Lieutenant-Commander is the Chief Science Officer onboard, and the Chief Engineer.)

Wendalia was dressed in a light onyx ball gown with snow white fur trimming the edges; that showed off her ivory pale skin in generous proportions. Her long snow-blonde hair was tied back from her face in a long trailing pony tail. Merlot-red eyes gave Wendalia an almost noble grace, and a pair of cold frozen lips sparked thoughts of death.

Of course they'd all be in military uniforms so the clothing is really not important in the descriptions but it ties things together nicely when you're writing character discriptors.

I had not actually considered what I wanted the uniforms to look like other than I don't want them to rip off Star Trek too much. So if you had any ideas I'd be happy to hear them.

Sorry for the wall of text by the by I just figured a complete discription would be more helpful.

Let me know your thoughts and thanks again for taking the time to consider my request, I really appreciate it.

Cheers,

The Weary TimeLord.