User blog comment:Breakaway Republic/Unfaithful/@comment-28935784-20160114160234

Ouch. I would've cried if I wasn't used to observing cheating, heartbreak, and extreme violence by now.

Cheating is one of the worst things you can do to your partner. There are others, but a betrayal of trust like that is awful to watch ... or experience.

I'm not particularly sensitive to non-monogamous relationships, and most of us probably shouldn't be in 2016. I think open relationships (two ways, one way, whatever) are a norm and acceptable – with conditions. If you search marriage counselling and relationship forums. People report getting tired of sex after so many years and long to experience other partners. It appears to be a lingering human flaw. That shouldn't happen in mamono relationships, but human nature is hard to overcome.

Even if humans or monsters (hypothetically) get tired of sex with a regular partner, they ought to discuss harems and swinging and place comfortable limits so that no one is hurt. Sneaking around behind a loving mate's back and getting your dick wet or pussy creamed is tempting and fun in principle, but the consequences will be disastrous.

Anyway, it's a story: rant over. This should remind us not to cheat and just masturbate ;), and it's an excellent one-shot. Keep writing, Breakaway! I've never found one story of yours which didn't hit me right in the feelz.