Thread:BTR180/@comment-27550231-20170103080540/@comment-28358106-20170110050030

I think you did well. In fairness you were just kinda tossed in, and there's not much plot threading the whole thing together, so stretches would have to be made.

You might consider when you end your entries saying something more definitive, like "I go back to the clinic amd look for the doctor" rather than "I go back in the direction of the clinic." It helps tie stuff together easier.