User blog comment:Knight of Londor/From the Stars- Chapter 1/@comment-28365753-20170426005700

I also have found MGE to be quite an interesting experience. I would never have pegged myself liking it or writing fiction.

As far as your writing goes it is pretty good. The main problem I have with it is the flow of the writing and how you treat dialog. Its a bit klunky at times. Dialong is my hardest part as well.