User blog comment:ThemoonprinceN/Yandre Laima vs Protective Minotaur: A misunderstanding/@comment-27013779-20160118042540

I have good and bad criticism.....sorry. Good: The story itself is interesting and frankly very creative. I like it, bottom line. Bad: Really the only thing I didn't like it was the certain lack of grammar and correct sentence posing....yes, yes I'm a grammar nazi.

Good job, bro -Carthois