User blog comment:Safnar/Autin Purestone (Short story)/@comment-72.233.169.33-20150512191212

Nice story. Really good to see a protagonist who is not completely paranoid about monsters this time.

Also, I must say, I think that this story shows you have been improving on your writing. While there are still a few grammatical mistakes, it has a higher grade of writing than some of your previous stories (no offense to your earlier works). Well done on the improvement!