Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-35898511-20180701182808/@comment-35654578-20180702152332

LorialetDreamer wrote: Zenrony wrote: LorialetDreamer wrote: I don't know what is worst. The WWYD which is literally one sentence(even if the story not bad at all), or the only answer... Hey! What's wrong with my answer? Sure it's not a bunny story but it's not that bad... @Zenrony, while I appreciate the story is not all "lovey-dovey", there is lot of incoherences to begin with : The Chief God can't transform the monster in their previous form, otherwise she would have done it long time ago, same things for granting this power to somebody... if she could, things would be differents.

Also the whole "The Chief God give me her protection" is a bit OP and a bit lazy, but the WWYD implied that the MC is "not an easy target", so it can make sense.... I guess?

And then your character simply become OP and can literaly control all the monster if he want to, but the real problem is : Why transform all the monster you met in the MGE world in their former form?

It also implied that they are back to their state of killing machine, so they simply kill both human and mamono on their path... Needless to say that most people here don't enjoy mamono getting killed for no reason...

" I will defeat the Order and the Demon Lord "

So your character is going to defeat them by simply go on a rampage and kill them all... It's ridiculously OP, and for your information The Order serve the Chief God, and the Chief God's goal is not to exterminate her own people.

So yea, the whole story feel like a "My character become absolutely OP and kill everyone" ... The WWYD wasn't even about that in the first place... Got it.

Although, I still think my story was pretty good if we accept some writing liberties.