Talk:Vampire/@comment-174.236.34.59-20150331233754/@comment-25035274-20150402164441

Not bad for a first try at a serious response, Anon. Couple words of advice, though, to help you in the future.

First: In the future, break them into smaller paragraphs. It'll help the readability a lot. 3 to 5 sentences is a good 'general' guideline, though that can vary depending on your needs.

Second: Might wanna archive it somewhere if you're proud of it. I say that because really long responses to "What Do"s sometimes get purged for length.

Again, though, good job. Especially as it's a first effort.