User blog comment:AngryLance/A brave new world, a scared young heart - Part 2/@comment-44242415-20191027131848/@comment-44242415-20191027142017

It depend of what you want to create, but it seem to be a narrative story, not a script or a story board, so writing straight up who say what in front of the line is probably a bad idea, or you would have something a between some kind of narartive story, and some kind of story board.

Maybe you meant adding narrative sentences from time to time in the dialogs hinting to the reader who is talking? Because it is probably the best solution I would say. It also what the story is clearly lacking of considering the long part of it dedicated to dialog.

But if it's just a little prologue to introduce your rp characters, I guess it's all ok.

Also, the character in the manga you mention have clearly less exagerated breast, yet way more than necessary. Also, from what I remember, nothing happen much in this manga, but I'm really don't want to make it feel like I'm arguing, so I am not going to advance more on that point. ^^"