User blog comment:UnbalancedSpoon/Healing Grace (Harem): Pilot/@comment-37523810-20181212030746/@comment-25808351-20181212045354

That’s a good idea. And definitely expand details on characters (personality, looks, physiques, backstories and little quirks about them that helps further their character). Also use more details in locations, situations, objects, etc. But again just watch the detail on sexual situations.