Thread:TheSnub/@comment-24664052-20140608095034

Mansion on the borders of Lescatie, the Fallen City

"Ah...That's him..." The Succubus sitting on her throne watched her magic crystal eagerly as it focused on the average looking young man that led his companions into the forest. "And to think, lover...You would run from me in Lescatie."

The mamono was a tall, statuesque beauty with pale skin. Her red eyes gleamed cruelly in the dimness of the old mansion. She was clothed in simple robes but in the light it would briefly show she had almost nothing on. Her tail swished eagerly.

"Ah...dearest Koriel..." She whispered huskily. "I will have you...whether you want it or not..."

So far, your fan fic impresses but me what caught my attention the most is the succubus who has feelings for Koriel. Mind if I can write a history for them, what are her plans for him and how parallel is their love story to my OC's? 