User blog comment:MockingJester/Foreign attunement/@comment-24026095-20170525015228/@comment-24026095-20170525043625


 * P That compliment really means a lot, thank you. But I do think it's got enough attention to detail. I'm just used to stuff which is longer since I enjoy taking time to read those. Or write them, like right now.

I do go into excess details on occasion, BTW, sometimes to make the story longer on purpose, or because its a D/s story which gets me revved up and horny enough to add more spice in the rice.

The proportion to which I add raunchiness or backstory in a tale is dependent on the fun I have imagining or thinking of others fapping to it when it's published, and that hasn't worked for all of my works, sadly. Like the mucus toad and akaname story (Tonguejobs Are A Real Job), since I think I'd prefer tonguejobs from a ghoul. But it is what it is.

You and I are both trying to make our anecdotes specific, as well as hooking the reader. And you've at least tried to do so for TRK's mamono. I haven't started on his requests at all since I don't think I've found a mamono I really want to write about, and I've got a very limited plot selection. I'm finding stories about dark elves, jinkos and hellhounds (the latter of which is probably next) easier to pump out since 1) I like them, 2) they're familiar after two years on the wiki, and 3) I'm getting plots or ideas for them a lot more easily for some reason.

It's good on you for experimenting with unfamiliar territory so soon. I might have some trouble writing about The Reptile Kingdom even with the fully created profiles, since ideas don't always come that easy.

The irony is that I haven't even tried to write a march hare one-shot, even though I've got some or the other double entendre I put in the comment section. I'll have to fix that. :D