User blog comment:AngryLance/A brave new world, a scared young heart - Part 2/@comment-44242415-20191027131848/@comment-39280634-20191027135102

Thank you for taking the time to look into it. I admit that these stories are meant to better integrate my character into MGE and they even serve as a prequel for an RP i'm in and this i don't expect a lot of people to see them. Still, i'd like to justify some of my choices in style here:

1) Lower case I's: it's related to the way i usualy write in English but i was considering maybe to fix them someday. Not a bad observation.

2) The use of italics: That was meant to represent the other character (Meri,Lina) speaking, other than Lance. But i'm recently thinking of fixing those too and just straight up write who's dialogue is who's.

3) Meri's image: I totally admit that it's my kind of body type in these (and what other Mamono represents that better than Holstaurs, one among my favorite Mamonos). But just so you know, a chest like that is not as impractical as many would think. Not to mention that you can have a serious story with these kind of characters: