Thread:JeielYozama/@comment-39280634-20190830090750/@comment-26517142-20190831032448

I see. So his grandfather led him to be transported into the Mamono Realm. Alright.

I would suggest you start building up on the plot history so this guy has some good backstory to who he is. Also, a bit of character explanation would help. Like, how he is as a person.