User blog comment:Safnar/Monster school (part 1)/@comment-23603505-20160208071136

This is very good story I see a lot of potential, your description of the characters are very good especially. I really do like Ele your descriptions your and her actions were a bag turn on for me. I found the centaur Catrina very cute a centaur acting like a Nightmare ^^. I hope Austien mans up and tames that mare.

Melody is also very beautiful and oozing with fapamania. you have done well thought you do need to check your work there are a few misspelling.

Hmm Perhaps we could have a crossover someday.