User blog comment:Safnar/Monster school (part 1)/@comment-27036092-20160427093416

Hi! I've read the six chapters you've released so far, and I like them quite a lot. The only problem I had were the orthographic mistakes (as someone has already mentioned on part 6's comments, if I remember well). So I've tried to correct part one a little...

I've added some commas when sentences were too long and/or when it made sense to put some, added some dashes to link words where it made sense, and corrected some words that were spelled incorrectly. http://pastebin.com/Y1jwXYku

However I've left some things that might be errors, but that I didn't want to modify not to drift too far away from what you had written in case they're not mistakes (such as "but they had a few rules to their game that’s kept us safe")(I'm not a native English speaker so there are times I just can't tell). I hope you'll appreciate the correction work though, and keep up the good work! :)

(Also maybe you can replace the text with the corrected one, restore the previous version, then check the edit history so you can see what I've modified...)