User blog comment:Drkness231/Mamono One-Shots S2! Chapter 4: Arachne/@comment-122.52.77.223-20150527163230

This one is very nice. You could feel what is happening in the story. Well practically all your stories. The only problem is that sometimes it to short. Like when you get to the climax of the movie it abruptly ends. I know that you could make them better and when I said I know I mean you can like literally you got it man! The plot is very nice and everything is well placed but you need to make it a bit longer so you feel satisfied with the outcome of the story. You don't feel like your being left hanging.

Anyways it's always nice reading your stories keep them up man 👍

P.S: sorry for the long rant