Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-28718853-20180807230519/@comment-1005186-20181007200507

Thanks LorialetDreamer, every little bit of constructive criticism helps

Anna vs Anne: that was mainly a typo on my part, it was supposed to be Anna, but since it can be spelled both ways, I didn't catch it

The sudden abridge word: its supposed to be 'us' but it looks like the s got lost when I was formatting the response. I type my responses in a word document so I don't lose anything, but when I transfer it over, I have to redo all the formatting. It most likely happened then

'you see': this is a symptom of my disjointed writing style, because I have both ADHD and a writing disability, it's had to get ideas down on paper. I type when I can and in small spurts, thus the sudden fourth wall breaks. But I will be on the look out for this next time

Again, thank you very much, pointing those things out helps me be a better writer!

And thank you Flamebiplane for the inspiring WWYD!