User blog comment:Thescarlethuntress/The adventures of Neyra and Mikan/@comment-5426290-20140902070838

I like the backstory and what the current ending suggests to. The story does shift very quickly and you can't keep apart which character is saying what yet, but the basic footing of a very good fanfic is definitely present.

I hope you will continue your effort to turn this into an enjoyable read. (OwO)/