Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-24.56.178.74-20190326200441/@comment-36855838-20190326204340

Wow, that's quite the wall of text!

This brings to mind a fanfic I read ages ago, it was an aged-up Undertale one, the whole thing was written like this:

Person 01: Hello, how are you?

Person 02: I am well, and you?

Person 01: I am also well, I've been working on my nutritional habits.

The writer(s) explained that breaking everything up into separate lines

Aided in checking their spelling and grammar.

I highly reccommend introducing more frequent line-breaks in the future.

(That line down there is seven hyphens)

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(That line up there is seven hyphens)

It is an honor to know we have a lady amongst us, and miss, I encourage you to review more thoroughly the content posted wherever you are posting things.

Yes, we do write stories here, but we are writing them in response to scenarios laid out by others!

I also reccommend cross-referencing the profiles for the specific monster girls we are writing about.

In particular, you chose to center your tale on slimes, and included a Dark Slime, in particular.

Their behavior is described as always converting human women into more dark slimes.