User blog comment:MockingJester/Oh, sweet porter/@comment-44242415-20191231101626

I really enjoy your work, I personnaly found this story really really bad however.

There is one simple reason at that : Druella.

Druella is a crazy nymphomaniac that impose her vision to others, she is withour a doubt the antithesis of romance, and probably only worry about filling her orifice with 10 kilogram of meat every day. Sorry for the vulgarity, but Druella incarnate the aspect of MGE I hate the most, and I am trying really hard to pretend the fact she is canon is not that bad.

But I am barely exagerating, if you read her story, she just rape women, throw them at a man that don't even like them, or that they barely know in fact, and then have her way with this very same and very married man...

So, for the sake of the story, let's say Druella is deep down a romantic, it's do not fit the tone or the purpose of the character, but it's possible. She spend her time raping people, she may as well rape my suspension of disbelief.

But a childhood friend? I'm sorry but this just don't work for me, it almost sound like a parody, some line on the fiction make me half laught half cringe :

" if I wanted a meat puppet to satiate me in the cold nights, I could have taken the first gutter-minded noble that drifted in my direction "

She literraly did jump on the first man she saw. And proabbly the one right after. And there is so many more that are just completly unfitting to the character, like she was a maiden that waited for her loved one... Come on.

Don't get me wrong, except the fact it's Druella, the ficiton is reallly really good, but I simply don't understand what you tried with Druella. Either, after playing Death Stranding, you started with the idea of making a story about Druella, but then I don't understand how you come up with this scenario for her, or you started with the idea of the scenario, and you decide to put Druella in it, but then I don't understan at wich moment you thought she was fitting in.

So it should be a really good story, but it's really bad, and I am really confused why you tried tothrow Druella into this story.