User blog comment:Gnomehunter/October Monster Girl Writing Challenge/@comment-44242415-20201003154309/@comment-44242415-20201005094658

Sorry, let me rephrase what I exactly meant, your story don't really have a lot of NTR in itself, but there is several instance of mamono having their way with a married man.

There is first the fact Jerry already had a wife and daughter, and yet a mamono try to get their way with him, and he don't feel particulary guity about cheating on his wife, making both him and Anna quite unlikeable.

Then there is the Ant Arachne, and once again, she get her way with a married man without a care in the world, and he cheat on his wife here gaain without any sign of guilt. I was seriously expecting the queen to join in and personnally "punish" Clark and Alyssa at this point.

However there is some good points.

After that the Aina and the other characters are actually angry at Alyssa, as I said, there is plenty of story where the characters feel no jealousy and only care about having sex with the men, not caring if other women do as well or caring about in his well beign. You also made her face consequences for her action, she have actually to work and pay for what she have done. As I have expressed earlier, generally the worst story don't do that since it's never considered a "bad" thing that a character have her way with the protagonist, no matter the way.

I don't think it's exactly NTR, but I think you write it clumsily, or it could have been worded with more care. I am not going to judge your writing skills considering mine, but I feel like I got a different feeling of the story from what you intented to write.