Thread:RealityWarper/@comment-27570904-20160120192945/@comment-4407082-20160120235810

Sorry for the delay, had a lots of things to do today.

Look, it isn't that your story is bad, it is just that it is not within my taste. I apologize if it came accross as saying it was bad, it wasn't. It is just that we have enough monster girls already who "want a strong man!" (either by monster or human standards): Lizardman, Salamander, Baphomet, Hinezumi, Valkyrie (at least in the vast majority of cases). But we have no monster girl with explicit preference for weaker men, we only have 2 monster girls with implied preference for weaker men, the Amazoness and specialy the Hellhound.

It just kinda striked me the monster most attuned to weak men, turned into one demanding strenght of men. But I might be biased, I like femdom and strong monsters raping and marrying weak men. And to be honest, I have thought at times of making stories about Salamanders marrying men that have no experience or skill in combat, so it would be hypocritical to call you on making a Hellhound go for capable men.

I don't want to impose my views on your story, is your story.

If you want to ask what I would do, well I would have the guy lose the race and the Hellhound still taking him in, I can think of 2 scenarios:

1) The Hellhound reveals she was lying and just wanted to see how much he could escape, that there wer enot earlier men and she just wanted to have fun.

Or

2) True to her word, the Hellhound leaves the guy on his own in the forest, but seeing the guy can't survive and seeing him all defenseless, her protective instincts are activated and she decides to keep him to "protect him", which would be consistant with the Hellhound protective instincts.

But hey, if you want the Hellhound to want a guy that is not considered weak by human standards, it is your call, it would not be a bad story, it would just not be my taste.