User blog comment:AngryLance/A brave new world, a scared young heart - Part 1/@comment-25808351-20190929140726/@comment-39280634-20190929141845

Glad you liked it. I hope it was easy to diferentiate which dialogue was who's.

Could you point where you found those grammar mistakes ? I proof-read it a couple times and fixed a few, but i'm not where else to find them.