Thread:RealityWarper/@comment-27570904-20160120192945/@comment-4407082-20160121020231

GlintLock wrote: Well I thank you very much for the advice and I first just want to say this.

there is no need whatsoever for you to apologize.

You were merely voicing your opinion and there is nothing wrong with that. I'm actually glad that you gave some criticism based on you opinion because it shows me what I might want to think about when writing. I realized that there were some different story choices I could have made that I actually prefer, but the moment has passed and cannot be changed. But I can still change what I will do with the rest of my story.

I will let you in on a sneak peak of what I thought might be good for the rest of the story.

1) I had an ideas to bring back the bandits from Part 1 and make it so the Hellhoind had to protect him from the bandits. This is the main idea I have right now but I'm having a little trouble transitioning the story in that direction and am still figuring it out.

2) I had an idea at first that I am putting aside unless I either need or really want to use that I was thinking about using for this story first. I had an idea that the MC found out that there were bandits actively tracking the Gellhound, and rather than just use this to his advantage and get away from the Hellhound, he decides to try and stop the hunters. Or they would be bounty hunters, but with the same goals Im having trouble deciding that and also trouble with where that would go from there, which is why I switched to the first option.

So what do you think?

Well in my opinion (which you are free to disregard, again I am talking from a femdom perspective) it could be some sort of option 1. The guy could lose the race and the Hellhound initialy abandons him, until she sees the bandits that come after him and then steps in to protect him and makes him her husband to keep him safe because he found his weakness "cute" having activated her protective instincts or very easy to dominate.

Just my 2 cents.