User blog comment:Hakaishin Aro/Ideas, snippets, sneak peeks and concepts./@comment-30014014-20170826031028/@comment-28144855-20170826035652

Thanks for the feedback Jester, it means alot. It actually help me see what to improve in the story. This is just a few little thoughts bits and pieces I made trough the last 10 or so days put together. It is just a teaser for now, so there will be expansion and improvement. Glad you liked it though. It is supposed to show the two halves interact with eachother and their environment. Also the 'dark' one's reasons for becoming dark in the first place. He did not start evil, you can say he is jealous of mortals in a way.

Little spoiler: It will also showcase a similar scenario like the biblical story about Lot and Sodom and Gomorrah, and the righteous. And a special someone that even Arael couldn't help but respect, even care for.

I'm now piecing Mirrored together from bits and pieces I had to filter what I won't use and to make it fit with your responses guys.