Thread:Rexir2/@comment-24664052-20151109061418

Sorry for disturbing you again, but I need your help on this one.

Remember the first chapter for my fan fic? Yeah, well, I want to change it. Reading that chapter now makes me feel awkward, since I think that I have worded the characters’ dialogue very awkwardly (I may be literally fluent at English, but it’s not my native language), and the characters may not be acting normally for my current tastes (but before I just thought them as alright, and well, just published it.) I want to (and may) rewrite it again, and now I’m at a loss of dialogue. Maybe you can help? If you can, we can replay and roleplay that scene? And see if you can write more appropiate conversations than me? 