User blog comment:Jerichow/My Hellhound Wife's "Towering" Mishap - Ch 2/@comment-5426290-20160225112808/@comment-25817038-20160226014842

Glad you liked it! I admit there is a lot more work I want to put into this, but damn if I didn't want to at least get something posted to continue this.

The transition needs a lot of work now that I'm going back and re-reading it, and I'm going to probably rewrite it this weekend, I envisioned it transitioning a lot better in my head when I was writing it so I'll go ahead and add a good bit more to it to smooth things out.

Also I'm not sure what you mean by the D being crushed somewhere. You talking about the point where Serena was boning the Overseer with the strap-on? Otherwise I don't understand which part you're talking about. To be honest I thought it coming off as her turning the tables on the Overseer would have been more evident.... I need to work on that some more.

Getting the sisters down right is kind of a pain since they're both Hellhounds, I'll reread this looking for where I screwed up the names, though I do admit, there are points where the story does jump between the two frequently.

Other than that I'm glad you liked it, I wanted to do a bit more with this after you and Lollipop liked it, and he gave me the idea of taking things a step farther. I'll probably add a third and final chapter to this a little later on, because yes, there are a few more things I want to do with this story now that I've flushed it out a bit more! XD