Thread:FlashWally22/@comment-28166070-20160517011734/@comment-28166070-20160517031252

One of the issues I see here is they're all a case of Mary Sue (at least to me), epsecailly the Alraune. Having time manipulation is just about that of a god. The most powerful wizards in this make believe don't have that capability. She by herself could essentially bend the entire world to her will.

Harderst part here is seeing how all these godly ones fit together. It reminds me a lot of Tenchi Muyo, however it took a LOT of time to explain how all those powerful being came to reside in the same place.

I'll sleep on it i guess and see if anything strikes me.