User blog comment:Safnar/Monster School (Part 6)/@comment-28166070-20160423153701

Safnar,

Let me start by saying I love this story and I'm eager to see where things wind up. I've been a fan of this site for years but only joined recently. I've read all your stories and I think your ideas are very entertaining and original.

Having said that, I need to tell you that the only thing keeping you down is your grammar and spelling. Everyone has the occasional slip up, but in your stories I see these mistakes constantly, and it throws off the pace of the reader when they have to keep going back over a sentence to better understand it.

Please understand this is only meant to be constructive criticism, and I would happily volunteer to proof read your submissions for grammar. If you're interested, just let me know.

Keep on writing!

Xmodius