Thread:AngryLance/@comment-39280634-20191112191804/@comment-28144855-20191201142654

I always struggle with beginnings, since a beginning of a story is crucial, the thing that make readers interested in it. Then, as I fail myself, procrastination worms itself in as a vulture ready to pick at my patience and my story's remains.

I wrote down a lot of scenes down already, added many footnotes to my drafts for later chapters and overall really did lot of covering, I usually don't do this thoroughly. But alas, I'm stuck with the beginning when I should work on how to spice the plot and make it better. Hell I even made several branching possibilities for several points in the story, depending on how I will feel it fits best.

It's a damn 1500-1800 words prologue that is holding me hostage. I was thinking about posting it like it is, maybe a bit more polished and return to it later, once I'm confident in writing that story and those characters appearing in it.

BTR, the story is about a character appearing here, hell there's a mention of the Arbiter in the prologue, but it is not set or connected to the MGE, hence I'm posting it elsewhere. And since I finally wanted to give my characters justice and write them properly, so the people can enjoy them as they are meant to be I want to make it as good as I can.

The main character isn't a dashing human knight, nor a white armored hero, it's the demonic looking counterpart of Andrej the Watcher apprentice, his Echo. a guy that never spoke a word in any of his appearance.