Thread:EndlessVøices/@comment-27950421-20181016214115/@comment-27950421-20181017015817

I have... mixed feelings.

I'm a bit experienced with story making, especially world building though I rarely put everything to paper, I'm rather good at analyzing a story. To be brutally honest, Toriyamas world building is mediocre at best and he focuses so much on Goku that it is severely harmful to the other characters and the story as a whole. He also fails to make note of what happens in his storylines or of important lore, something any writer working in fiction should do. This isn't even touching his absolutely terrible sense of power scaling. The point is, Toriyama made one of the corner stones of anime and one of the biggest icons of Japanese culture, second only to Godzilla really, but as a writed, he's wasteful, forgetful, and enthusiastic to the point that it is detrimental, an overall mediocre writer.

I like that Dragon Ball series, but it's too easy for me to see the failings for me to go full fan boy for it. Godzilla is more my fandom.

Aro is a different persons OC. I was using him as an example of how you have options. Aro belongs to Aro, but Aro hasn't been on in a while.