Talk:Cheshire Cat/@comment-29135155-20161127135937/@comment-27025977-20161128015943

@All4inches

While you are right, I was just sarcastically summing the whole story of one big disaster after another. Maybe It's just me but getting your test screwed, then getting beaten up to the point that I need to go to a hospital, right after healing a bit I suddenly jumped out of my passenger seat and into a truck going at speeds that I need another hospital visit. Not only that but the same truck ran me over twice. Then afterwards the kitten I saved was apparently from the lineage of those she-beasts that litterally just brutalize me not a week before.

Yeah I say this is far beyond the lines where I suspend my own belief. Though I want to clear this up before anyone gets the wrong idea-

No I'm not trying to belittle the OP WWYD, I just want to point out how out of order it sounds. Don't worry, everyone starts off somewhere and it's okay, you'll get better at it. Then again, it might be just me and my personal peference on story telling.