User blog comment:Knuckles213/An Adventurer’s Folly - how I caught a Cyclops/@comment-74.129.96.228-20160206191119/@comment-27073023-20160207045441

hmmmm........well I have to at least thank you for the constructive critism. you must understand that this was contest submission with a hard word cap limit. this story will be updated soon and revised for easy reading and understanding. No the main character doesn't know what the other's know(I'll label for you next time). as far a first person vs third person......think of it as a narrative anime(if that works better for you.) I'll be more detail with stuff when there's a larger word limit than 5000 word(I actually had to delete/cut just to fit the requirement).

plus I did take time to write this fyi (what free time I could spare while being in school and working).

thanks anyways, I'll do better next time(there's always room). plus aborb the feedback like a sponge.

see ya next cyber cowboy; I'm pretty sure you'll enjoy my next wacky ride(story) in my wonderland theme park.