Board Thread:Fan-made Monsters/@comment-35065688-20180321125742/@comment-27950421-20180321134351

Hmm... brutally honest, this was poorly done. I can see that your a fan of my work and I want to encourage you to not simply quit, but you also have to remember that this stuff takes time and effort.

What I want tou to do is take a look at my works, look at how they are written and how they are structured then come back and expand on this.

Words and language are the building blocks with which to create your works. I try to create beautiful palaces and impenetrable fortresses. This? As it stands you have a blueprint and a bile of bricks. You need to learn how to put those bricks together and learn how to do it.

So to sum this up, you're not done, this is not a completed work but a basic concept for one so get to work.