User blog:Hakaishin Aro/Fate: Worlds Colliding

(Purely  narrative intro/prologue for an RP I planed. I'm interested to hear your thoughts about it, which could/should improve before continuing the plot in the RP, which would be soon after this intro, hours soon.)

Prologue

It was seemingly a normal day in Fuyuki city, Japan. The entire town was bathed by the gentle rays of the morning sun, fitting considering how slow the city life seemed this morning.

It wasn't any different for the inhabitants of an European style mansion, located  in the outskirts south west of Fuyuki urban area, hidden by a thick forest and a bounded field that has recently been upgraded to full on separate realm, a personal domain more exactly. The luxurious mansion belong to a very unique family to say the least originating from Europe, The von Einzbern family. They're the ones who 'won' the 5th Holy Grail War.

It was a phyrric victory, as the purpose of the whole ritual, the Grail War was never achieved, the path to Akasha the Root, the ultimate goal of the magi from the three founding families never reached. There were losses but also fresh beginnings, but in the end it was the best possible conclusion one could hope for, all things considered.

The person which was mostly responsible  for the outcome of the Fifth Grail War, one Andrej Horvat had once a muh more sinister Agenda for the people of Fuyuki, Earth and the entire existance of their very multiversal region. If it wasn't for one small silver haired, red eyed girl, hundreds of Trillions  would cease to be, absorbed as energy by Horvat.

The former Human now an Abstract entity planned to use the Fuyuki Grail as his 'Entryway Zero', a place from which he planned to punch a connection trough to Akasha sending an energy feedback loop into the Root, one that would so to speak spread trough Akasha into every realm, universe and dimension connected to it by any mean, even outside of the Multiverse region's time-space.

Once the loop is complete and running, one much more morbid plan was to be put in act, one that involved the genocide of the very planet Earth, it's End.. Earth would be robbed of all its and its inhabitants lifeforce, which would be used to start the process of total energy draining untill total enthropy, a self sustained process gaining power as it would occure until it was time to consume the gained energy.

But what was an even more cruel and twisted fact, one  just thinking of it hurt Horvat's proverbial heart more than anything he'd ever be willing to admit. Namely, his plan consisted of using the small silver haired Homunculus as a catalist for his wicked deed, the same one he use to call little sister nowadays.

Fortunatelly, one fateful night everything changed. Andrej's cold heart and demeanor towards the small girl he saw as naught but a mere tool, a mean to an end, to a goal he set for himself to achieve. In a single instant, the girl in question, be it by pure luck, coincidence or by fate itself saved her world, herself and even her newfound older brother, not even realizing what she did.

Now, shortly after the Fifth GW conclusion, they are finally ready to celebrate their earned Victory in the company of their innermost circle of people, ones that they consider to be their closest family and friends. The close group was enjoying their early started day, basking in the sun, reminiscing of the recent event. Apparently, they are about to meet a girl very important to Andrej, an Angel, an actual Angel from Heaven. The one that saved him so many years ago, making all this possible. Shy as he is, Andrej quickly found himself on the recieving end of his family members teasing.

Genuine laughter was heard on the von Einzbern property, one not heard on this piece of land since the times before the Fourth Grail War was going on in Fuyuki 10 years prior this, 'last one'. Little did they know their joyful time together will be cut short any moment now, their well deserved peace shattered and blown into the wind by the shadow of war and an enemy ready to do what it takes to complete their mission, wipe out Humanity using a similar method Andrej wanted to all those years ago.

Seemingly vanishing into thin air Andrej Horvat spirited himself across nameless realms in order to reach the place where a person very special to him was waiting.

Several minutes passed in tranquility at the von Einzbern property, south west on the outskirts of the city, as Andrej Horvat, the winner of the 5th Grail War warped back on the lawn in the mansions inner garden. The look on his face was mortified, probably because of the small statured girl standing at his side. She wore a gothic lolita maid dress, her blonde hair was tied in pigtails. Her blue eyes scanned the crowd gathered in the garden, as she felt all attention was shifted towards them.

"My my, what a lovely couple you two make." said a red dress clad Irisviel in a sweet tone,  sporting an equally sweet smile, as a family servant Homunculus wearing a french maid outfit huffed in what appeared to be a hint of jealousy.

Illyasviel, Andrej's adopted little sister noticed the look on his face and couldn't stop laughing at his embarrassed expression.

A tall, white haired man wearing a red overcoat and leaning on the mansions outer wall just whistled and winked teasingly at the couple

"She's pretty..." a shy bespectacled woman with light purple hair said quietly, quickly hiding her face behind her book.

"...hmmmh... quite shtrong, mm..." was all that Artoria Pendragon, The King Arthur, said in between chewing and gulping down large quantities of food while the red headed boy sitting by her side simply nodded at the two politely before turning towards his blonde companion and speaking his mind, "Saber, you're such a glutton." which had the King of Knights turn beet red of embarrassment.

From the other side of the table, a black haired girl was quietly observing them, absorbing the scene in her memory. This will give her plenty of material to get back at Horvat for his teasings and scares since they met.

Mittelt observed  the people associating faces with the stories and names she heard so many times about in countless stories Andrej told her after their reunion. She fixed her gaze on a certian silver haired girl, offering her a small smile and a nod of gratitude which the Homunculus reciprocated.

'I need to thank her for keeping this idiot here in line.' the GuardianAngel made a mental note before she reached with her hand towards Andrej,

"Well, won't you introduce me ?" she asked with a cute fanged smile as he offered him her hand in a rather cute display.

To the others amusement, Andrej grasped her hand with the utmost delicacy, and murmured something sounding like 'Right.'

Alas, Fate wasn't about to let it happen.

In a fraction of a second, everyone in the garden tensed, those sitting stood up, all sporting serious faces that felt out of place for such a gathering as all assumed what appeared to be a fighting stance. And with good reason,

Something wasn't right. Andrej was sure he dismantled both the lesser and Greater Grail for good, along with his evil 'shadow' and Angra Manyu. It was a struggle of epic proportions, one he was able to win with the timely intervention of Illya's mother Irisviel and the person that introduced herself as 'Grandma', their ancestor and founder of the Fuyuki Grail War system, Justeaze Lizrich von Einzbern. Both women's consciousnesses seemd to be lingering within the Grail.

"The Fuyuki Grail?! It can't be!" Andrej stated, shocked at what he was sensing, but that was barely the tip of the iceberg. He could distinctively feel a shift in timespace, reminding him of how his 'shadow, his cosmic echo wanted to slip back trough time to absorb the Grail 10 years prior his arrival on this world. Furthermore, it appeared an incredible ammount of energy was gathering above the town, growing steadily as seconds passed,

"Dammit!" Horvat cursed realizing what was the purpose of the high ammount of such volatile energy.

(I'd appreciate honest opinions, ideas and reviews. Thanks.)