User blog comment:NightmareAura/Encounter in the Woods- A Manticore One-Shot/@comment-27610495-20170719014418

This is good. Would be nice if we had a seuqul of some kind, or like a series (they could eventually fall in love or something) but it was good.

The main character jsut being called "the young man" does kinda bring you out of the story thoguh, you should've made up a name. (Maybe a stock name you can use in all your one-offs, since it sounds liek you write a lot)

ANywya it was good overall, I enjoyed reading it.