Board Thread:Roleplay/@comment-39791808-20200101222327/@comment-43665987-20200109072715

TheQueen43 wrote:

MEANWHILE...

''Michelle had her clothes off and was completely s=exposed, nut targetted James, while Selena had targeted Galicia. ''"Get away from him, Mindflayer!" she said, lunging right at her. (I hope you don't take offense, but would it be okay if you could rewrite this sentence, it's a bit hard to understand. I know that you were probably in a rush, but there are a bit of problems that makes it incoherent.)