User blog comment:Thescarlethuntress/The adventures of Neyra and Mikan/@comment-25188867-20140902041856

It is a nice read so far, but if you want any opinions on it, you will have to put some more story out there. I can't say lesbianism is a personal fetish of mine, but it does seem like you are setting up a nice story. You seem to have introduced three characters by name, so be sure to include them later. I have seen a few authors do so but never bring them up, leaving the readers wondering just who the hell those characters are. Anyway, I look forward to the next one.