Board Thread:What Would You Do?/@comment-34904368-20181105070927/@comment-36855838-20181106160455

SmartProtagonist wrote: Understood. Guess I’ll edit it a bit.

On point 2. i changed it so that he’s never met you or the husband, and doesn’t know anybody there save for his parents and his brother.

On point 3. the reason they must accept and not do anything to change their sons actions/mindset is because they live in order territory and he is an Order fanatic. Any moves made to cover things up or misdirect him will result in him reporting suspicious activity.

The first meeting, coupled with the terror of having heard stories about his actions, now that's a good recipe for horror!

Okay, so now he has them under his thumb, or rather, you've made that more clear. Even if they disapprove, even the humans can't show any animosity.

Although I imagine they couldn't be killed since they're not monsters, their lives would still probably get a lot harder. The extra suspicion could even ruin escape attempts! Which creates even more narrative tension.