Thread:HoundTheDestroyer93/@comment-27495139-20160223044340/@comment-25808351-20160224045936

While you do that, here just my suggestion on a story point. At (112) the colonel tells Andre that "you're the only way outta this place", but at (153) the colonel breaks Andre's ankle and leaves him for dead. Seems contradictory and counter productive for the colonel to pull that sudden 180. So I suggest rewording something or giving some sort of explanation to the colonel's actions. Maybe just taking out the "you're the only way outta this place" bit.

Other then that it was great. Liked that you fleshed out one of the secondary characters and I enjoyed the riddle going over Andre's head. Gotta admit him babbling about physics of a rainbow gave me a good chuckle.