Board Thread:Fan-made Monsters/@comment-5618861-20150801113935/@comment-27039570-20151008193029

Upon reading this, it seems to have a lot of potential. They could be one of the only wide-spread species to openly accept other wives, and that makes the thought of these very alluring in my eyes; they are actually very different! However, it needs some work...

The length is alright, but there are a lot of typoes/grammar errors. I would love to edit this, and then draw a sketch for you of a semi-demonic one; do you think it would be cool if they turned to look a little bit more like demons when their husbands accept their true nature? And especially so in monster friendly villages?

I'll try my best for you with both tasks. Depending on if you're fine with all this, and your response to those questions, I can fix up what you wrote nicely to include everything, mention that, and maybe even be a little shorter! I'll probably end up boldening it with sharpie pen, coloring it with marker and colored pencil, then scan it so it can compete with the image you provided.