Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-37028137-20200311171114

Greetings Lance,

Hybrids make for strange bedfellows, indeed.

As for the time travel I'll try explaining a tad easier. When Nick first falls through the portal into MGE (Chapter 6 I think) he lands in the future where he meets Vellantha. She already knows him because she lived through those years (in the past with him; that's all the adventuring they do.) Nick took a short cut by accident and arrived out of sync in the future and since this is his first time in this Universe he doesn't know her. He then spends a year in that timeline with that version of Vellantha trying to get his TARDIS back.

When he does get his TARDIS back he takes a short hop to test the engines and slips into the past. When he lands in the past and meets Vellantha again''' it is the past version of her. '''So she doesn't know who Nick is, but he knows her. (Because he spent that year in the future timeline) That is where they truly form their friendship, in the past, and then the timelines are 'synced up' again.

Does that make more sense?

By the by whilst you're here, I was wondering were those critiques I did of your chapters useful for you? Or not at all? Because I know I threw a lot of information at you in those entries.

Cheers,

The Weary TimeLord.