Talk:Hellhound/@comment-3290441-20160415001617/@comment-28144855-20160415145843

The problem here is that KC wrote as he went on, and by result it got more plotholes than DBZ. I love MGs, in fact I adore some of them (I'm a greedy bastard and can't chose one over the other) and I know it's just hentai, but I don't mind a hentai with good done story and setting, and this is not it. KC himself said that constructive criticism is ok, and I also know he is a very busy man. But I'd give my left testicle to see the story retconed someday.

It pains me to see wasted potential. This is awesome, but it could be legendary!

If DE is not mind control then how is it that the person can't leave the wife if I don't like her, where is my free will.

If I liked my human girl the way she was and she is changed, where is the happy end here? ( I blame the desings coz some human girls looked hotter before than after) Also personality changes no matter what anyone said, or there will be submissive/shy w/e Hellhounds, Manticores etc. from transformed humans.

PLEASE KC-SAMA Make MGs even better. I know it would take a enormous ammount of time, but it would make this even better.