Thread:AngryLance/@comment-37028137-20200128044919/@comment-39280634-20200208212645

Fair enough. Critique isn't the problem though. Trying to find ways on what to fix according to said critique is. I just hope that I will be able to fix whatever negative thing might pop up. Just to be clear: I'm not really an aspiring writer, but I do love to get immersed in what I'm doing here. So whatever advice I can get, just to make it better.

Thank you.