Thread:LorialetDreamer/@comment-37028137-20200307192347/@comment-37028137-20200307212237

Ah well, I don't suppose it matters now but I felt inclined to do a quick overview of my Nicholas Character's back story to explain why he appeared the way he did, along with Vellantha's backstory, and a few other characters.

Hmm,I suppose I don't need to publish it now. (That was a waste of an hour.) By the way, if it was the wording of the chapters you had trouble with I would be more than happy to explain portions?

If I may ask as well you mentioned 'Elements' which discouraged your reading could I inquire as to what they were?

I am sorry if this seems intrusive but the only way I can improve as a writer is with lots and lots of feedback.

Cheers,

The Weary TimeLord.