User blog comment:Naju Silver/Original Character: Yuna Suzuki, with story (Part 1)/@comment-25720867-20150126082632/@comment-25319939-20150126122955

Hmm can you explain what exakly you mean by "amiss", as what i have written, as off now is the start but i see it as a finished text other than maybe change a few sentences. i would glady take some criticism as it would help me improve.

About the art, i find these on the website Safebooru and sometimes i get lucky after hours of looking.

Edit: To clarify, The story posted so far is just the start, i will later post her teenage years and so on until i get to the point she starts to travel