User blog comment:Nuka Kazan/A Fake Wolf: The Order's Threat (Part 1)/@comment-25198101-20160104013443

A good start, though I do wish that it was a bit longer. Perhaps include the fight between Nuka and Hugh, explaining how Nuka was attacked, how he killed Hugh, and how he was detained as a result. Good reading so far, better than some of the other fanfiction around here...