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While i wanna say he'd escape the mge universe, I don't think a character type like his would be immune to the temptations at work in mge. No one is really.... Unless your gay.... maybe....
Ok what you just put in here is complete bullshit because the would not get disarmed in the first because he treasure his weapon the as he does for his pet rabbit and second of all it doesn't matter what mamono the doom slayer encounter if they try to force themselves on or rape him he will kill them no matter what kind they are with his bare hands and being ambushed by a small army of demons he would still kill them no matter what they are and in the slayer testament it stated that he is incorruptible so he is immune to any kind of temptations that are put in his way pluse he was blessed by a seraphim that gave him incredible power and speed that destroy everyone in the mge universe period and for that im done.
Well for the sake of a interesting story, he'd lose his weapon and possibly end ip captured. Plot armor and rage only go so far. Besides, its a whole new ball park for him if he ever entered the MGE universe.
I can see doomguy getting stranded and hunting for a way back to hell for a time just to get disarmed in a series of unfortunate and totally "isolated" events with either a wurm or a dragon before getting tricked into entering the MGE version of hell by a disguised demon....... And getting ambushed by a small army of demons, alps, succubi and other hell dwelling monsters. Maybe an ignis or two..... And becoming an unwilling incubus.
While i wanna say he'd escape the mge universe, I don't think a character type like his would be immune to the temptations at work in mge. No one is really.... Unless your gay.... maybe....
I'm about to walk over to her and offer her a room at my apartment when a man barrels past me, nearly knocking me off my feet at the speed he's running.
"Hey! What the- " I don't get the chance to finish as a mob of horny centaurs trample me in the fleeting man's wake.
'DAMN CENTAURS!!!!' I roar in my head, unable to even manage a low groan with how much pain I'm in.
The banshee ceases her crying for a moment, seeming to take note of my ruined form before standing for the first time and approaching me. Her melancholic cry steadily returns to my ears, growing with every step she takes. My vision begins to dim as she nears, her previously forlorn and sad cry now sounding more melodic and pleasant.
The pain recedes almost completely as she kneels down next to me and caresses my cheek, her tune beckoning and sweet despite it's mournful preset.
Just as my vision fades, I hear her whisper, "I'll be waiting for you, my love."
Nice job snake. The ending seemed a little abrupt though and could maybe use some more interaction or dialogue. Just a suggestion though, also I saw the kraken coming from a mile away bro. Your boi got lucky, no joke there.
Note: Let it be known that my characters are not mirrors of myself but random light bulbs in a sea of moths, so cease your judgmental faggotery and enjoy!!
"What the hell?" I shake my head in irritation. 'How old is this chick anyways?' The loli's magic is getting to me now, making me want to go snuggle with her and give her a long discussion about fresh donuts and cherry filled dots. 'Hold up...I'm not even into little girls? Her chest is a wash board!' I smack myself before puling out my double barrelled thot remover and level it at her chest, blinking away her charms as a surge of chaotic insanity surfaces in it's place. "Bitch please! I'm not a loli lover OR fucker. Now you have to the count of five to get your glassy, tear-jerking eyeballs outa this region or Ima blast your wonderland ass to the moon, capiche?" The lolis innocencent look vanishes faster then a roadrunner on speed.
Note: Should it be continued/built upon?
"Hi, I'm here advertising for a charity drive aimed at supporting and helping single males who are looking to get shacked up with the beautiful monster women of their dreams. I heard from an associate of yours named Billy that you were desperately seeking a partner and was wondering if you could answer some questions and possibly consider meeting with a few of my clients in the near future?"