Time for stupid questions! In mge, a gay man becomes a monster girl under the influence of demonic energy. But I think this is a good option for those cases when a gay falls in love with a non-gay, because becoming an Alp he solves the problem of different sexual orientations. What about two gay men who love each other? Will they become monster girls? What about bisexuals?
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I’m writing a sort of series, and I want some feedback. Essentially, it’s five two-part stories, but the first part is the same story for all of them. It’s like a prologue that leads into five separate stories. Maybe I’ll do an epilogue when I’m done. Tell me what you think, here or on the blog posts. All the parts are basically linked together.
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Hello fans, Ore-samma here.
So,
As much as I criticize bad world building, and bad writing, it is time for me to hitch up my trousers and see if I “can do better” and put my fingertips to where my mouth is and see if it can produce a cheque that can be cashed.
I ABSOLUTELY invite anyone and everyone to criticize the lore build that doesn’t turn a blind eye to the gaps KC’s efforts at world building produce.
What I do here, is something that has to hold water when it is tested, and I invite the lorekeepers who see the logical fallacies of KC’s world building and recognize them for what they are, to see if my attempts are any better.
Please do not clutter this Glossary with your comments. All of you were so very polite and considerate to leave my other postings like this neat and clean. And I thank every last one of you for it. The forum post(s) in the comments section here will have my publication(s) of world building and lore, and those are open for your comments, critiques, and criticisms.
Now, before I am accused of anything in particular, allow me to lay a few things down.
1) I am a fan of MGE.
Just because I am a fan of MGE, does not mean that I HAVE to excuse poor writing and poor world building from anyone. Just as we can love a relative and still be aware of, and point out their flaws and spheres we find issues with.
2) This entire set and series is to see if I- Ore-samma, can world build and have it remain logical, consistent, and stand up to the test of scrutiny.
As low as my own credibility might be, it is even less if I attempt to criticize something that I cannot produce for myself.
3) MY world building will be heavily based off of- not a carbon copy of KC's world building.
It is my intention to world build + Lore build in the areas that KC does not touch, or did not account for serious scrutiny.
This series is also going to be part of the foundation of how I write my one-shots from here on out.
4) I EXPECT for there to be flaws and logical dysfunction in my world building.
This is why I am using designations that software uses (V.1.0 etc) to be able to track and continue to evolve what I am doing to produce a better quality of writing from a better quality world+logic build.
"But it's fantasy" is not an excuse for poor world building and poor writing that I take seriously. One of the most successful series I can imagine which is The Dragon Lance Series by TSR (D&D) has one of the most extensive world building I can imagine. This series, as far as I have read them, adhered to its own world building and logic in a way that I have personally yet to see be overshadowed.
5) Critiques / Criticisms that cannot articulate where/why/how my world+logic build fails, will be ignored.
I am eager for criticism so long as it's something I can use. But if it is just a litany that amounts to "I don't like it" or "but KC says" it is likely to be of no real use and will be ignored, probably not even acknowledged.
This is not to say that KC's word is worthless or infallible. A great deal of MGE's world holds up to scrutiny, but not all of it.
I am eager to see how this ends up. These postings will stay off my Blog Posts.
As always, Ever your Servant-
Ore-samma
From what I've seen, there are indexes for the Monster Girls based off of alphabetical order, family and disposition but none for an environmental criteria. I think an index for habitat would be really convenient, especially for writing stories or roleplaying.
What do you all think?
I want to draw a Cheshire Cat OC. Any ideas for the physical appearence (clothes, color palette etc)? I’m lost.
If you have any ideas for other things like the disposition please tell me, every suggestion counts!
I don't know if this would go here, but it would be interesting if there was some kind of rarity list for the MGs- kind of like for the items that can be found in universe.
So I was looking up everything related to Centaur in the MGE the other day and realized: No Pegasus; why is this?
In terms of creatures of myth, Pegasus is the easiest to look up as she is in both the myth of Perseus where Perseus rides the Pegasus to slay the Kraken with the head of Medusa, and the myth of Bellerophon, son of Poseidon, who rides the Pegasus to slay the Chimaera. We have all the other aforementioned monsters and even Poseidon, so why not Pegasus?
Honestly, her MGE entry basically writes itself if you go just off the Bellerophon myth. Pegasus was in a cave that Poets frequent who attempt to ride her to gain inspiration for poetry. She is mischevious and quite willing to let anyone mount her and aquire said poetic inspiration. Once you do though, she will immediately take to the air and do everything possible to buck you off and drop you on your head, which causes amnesia and causes anyone dropped to lose all memory of their inspiration. If one manages to not get bucked off, however, Pegasus is the most loyal mount in all of Greek Myth and will never leave your side no matter the danger to herself.
Thus for the MGE entry that can be rought with innuendo: if you mount her and can ride her all the way, she is yours for life as a prospective wife; but if you cannot, then for love with her you have no shot.
Disposition: Flirty, mischevious, Loyal (Lustful)
The last monstergirl featured is Ice Queen, but since then we have already had the Griffon, the Trumpart, and the Dorome!
Not sure if this is the place for this, but this image
http://monstergirlencyclopedia.wikia.com/wiki/File:RxGhLZv.png
has been classified, probably due to her clothing, as a Ryu, but her horns seem to indicate that she is a Wurm. Sorry for being a nuissance if I'm wrong.
The page for the Fallen Maidens World Guide turns into a garbled and nonsensical mess near the bottom. That needs to be fixed, as it's a rather important page.
For some reason on mobile, it says there's 8 messages on my post, but I only see 4... can I just not see them? Is there a next page button in not seeing? Are they even there? HALP. ;-;
As in last stress test I got the issue that the chat suddenly stopped to let me post comments so I had to either refresh or logout completely to fix it. I have had the same issue again for about a hour or two(as this report is posted) I gladly inform that the Issue is not fixed.