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  • Guards walk you through the decorated halls of the castle. You had recently committed a crime and were now being brought before the princess to be judged. That princess also happens to be your sister.

    Your brought into the throne room and forced to a kneel in front of your sister, who looks down at you in a disparaging manner.

    "Brother," she begins, "For years you have brought value and honor to our ruling family, but now...you pull this."

    She shakes her head and continues, "This crime cannot go unpunished, but I am feeling generous today."

    You see her pace back and forth, "Every time a criminal was brought before me, I chose how he or she would be punished, but since you are my brother, I felt that it would be benefitting to give you the honor to select your punishment."

    She stops and glares at you, "One week in one of the three pits. The March Hare pit, the Hellhound pit, or the Oomukade pit. The choice is yours."

    WWYD?

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    • (Honestly, March Hare pit and not say a word)

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    • (hellhound, by far)

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    • "Oomukade pit."

      "....A-are you sure, no one picks the..."

      "Did I fucking stutter?"

      "Well no, bu..."

      "Oomukade. Pit."

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    • "EXILE  ME"

      "Brother that is not an option, choose from one of the three or i will choose for you"

      "I'll end up exiled one way or another"

      "..."

      "Fine hellhound"

      Later approaching the hellhound pit i thought to hell with it and ran towards the closest body of flowing water and tossed my self into it. I was promptly retrived and tossed into the pit, rest in piece my pelvis, no it was not broken from sex, i just landed on it

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    • The last thing my sister hears from me before I gain a Oomukade wife was "I find your lack of Unagi-Joro disturbing."

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    • I only choose pits that contain the goodest of girls

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    • “Oomukade pit.”

      “A-are you su-“

      “OOMUKADE PIT.”

      Logically the oomukade could just climb out

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    • Treahead: I hope you realize that the March Hares will just interpret your silence as consent and rape you anyway.

      Jerome292: Good choice!

      Beyondrapture: You are a brave man.

      Smorstin: Nice job. You've got a broken pelvis and are about to get screwed into oblivion by multiple Hellhounds.

      Tikkit: Nice Star Wars reference!

      TheSnakeLover: So you want the Hellhound pit? Okay then.

      SmartProtagonist: And then you discovered that the hole out was covered by a grate.

      Good answers everyone!

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    • Any of those 3.

      Because I like them all.

      Just put them all in a single pit trust me I can handle it...maybe.

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    • “I STOLE A SINGLE LOFT OF BREAD, How does a petty thief go into a pit of monsters,” I yell out.

      She speaks out, “Don’t question the systems or I will pick for you... besides we both know you are going to pick the -,”

      “March Hare” we both say at the same time.

      “Still as heavenly as that is, FOR STEALING A LOFT OF BREAD... I don’t want to know the charge for murder...” I sigh out.

      “Oh they’d get to choose between kobolds, Holstaur and weresheep.” She says completely seriously.

      “There is no way,” I say wide eyed.

      “I’m not joking... our parents are weird,” she shrugs off.

      “...yeah...” I say almost completely stunned.

      “Don’t need worry, you will be allowed to get out with on of the Hares... in 5 months .” She says.

      I sigh out,” Yeah put me in before I ask the punishment for genocide,”.

      She giggles and signals the guards to put me in the pit.

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    • HELLHOUND PIT!!!!

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    • Kiss your pelvis goodbye Hound

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    • Bah, I got this man!

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    • A real man would destroy his pelvis on his own terms. Also to assert dominace on a hellhound, you break your own pelvis

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    • BigJohn2: Okay then.

      Butterkingly: Shouldn't have stolen the bread. Oh well, maybe the March Hares will set you straight.

      Hound: I figured you would pick that. Still a good choice.

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    • SmartProtagonist wrote:

      “Oomukade pit.”

      “A-are you su-“

      “OOMUKADE PIT.”

      Logically the oomukade could just climb out

      Grease.

      Butterkingly wrote:

      “I STOLE A SINGLE LOFT OF BREAD!"

      You stole an attic-full of bread, which in itself is an oddly specific measurement, but that aside that's certainly a lot of bread.

      (I assume the holstaur pit is painted red?)

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    • Lets get that bread gentlemen.

      Alternatively, lets obtain that grain.

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    • I would thank you, but your profile picture is of a filthy Republic tank, rather then a majestic Hailfire Droid.

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    • March Hare. I very much prefer the pink floof to bug poison and bitch domination... And afterwards, when we are married, I will take my March Hare to all family gatherings and let her disrupt all conversations!. That will teach that bitch of a sister!

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    • I have a single rule, if it's a non-tapeworm bug girl it takes priority over everything else. Floof Rabbit is a close second amongst the choices.

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    • Since I am her brother, I probably know the pit she choose more often for the criminal to be punished in, all the girls are probably already married down there by now anyway.

      Well, I would feel ackward about be in the middle of an orgy, on my own, but that's for the better I guess...

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    • Oomukade pit, definitely.

      Smooch city, here I come.

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    • Meh, Where is Grizzly pit, Arachne pit, Minotaur pit, Kakuen pit, and Lamia pit...

      While March hares are cute fluffballs, I think I find them too annoying company, Sure the first couple days would go fine, but after that I think I would kill to get out of there, therefore absolutely not there.

      Hellhounds, I dont really find that attractive, they have the physical strength, thuogh not any indication of it (Like Jinko and Minotaur) and Oomukades bit too bite'y, althuogh I am attrated to their long bodies and countless number of legs...

      Bah, Oomukade it is.

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    • All the better to cuddle with!

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    • SmartProtagonist wrote:

      Kiss your pelvis goodbye Hound


      (Some elements removed for brevity)

      (Yadda yadda)

      The sex is extremely rough and wild, but they don't cause pain and agony for men through it.

      (Yadda yadda)

      In this way, they lash out violently at men with their lust, but they never treat men carelessly.

      They also recognize that humans are frail beings, and they treat them with care as "their one and only male," something more valuable to them than anything else.

      If an enemy tries to harm their male, they'll leap to his defense and attack the enemy with full hostility and ferocity, unlike how they treat their male.

      Even if the enemy isn't killed, they will surely witness the sight of hell.

      No matter what, they just won't become a "pet dog," but they do recognize the men they capture as their husbands and shower them with love just as any other monster would.

      But the more their love deepens, the more their lust blazes,

      (Yadda yadda)

      and they'll end up spending even more time riding on top of their husband.

      (Yadda training yadda)

      However, it's not like they have a lot of pride or anything, so even in the case when they're assaulted by a man, they don't get angry or refuse.

      On the contrary, they would likely gleefully accept it and enjoy being violated as a female in bestial intercourse.

      However, it never means they've been "broken." When the man is basking in glory thinking he has successfully forced one of them into submission, the next moment she'll counterattack and violate him in return, as if to say, "It wasn't nearly enough."


      Tl:Dr, hellhound does not break pelvis, hellhound instead keeps pelvis to herself forever.

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    • Pretty cool JTTW. Though believe me, them Hellhounds will need to work hard to destroy my pelvis.

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    • "I stole a loaf of breeeeeeeeeeead!" I exclaimed at her for the ridiculous punishment. "My friend's child was close to death! We were starving!"

      "You'll starve again!" My dearest sister pointed at me, shaking her head as she does so. "Unless you learn the meaning of the law."

      "Fine, I pick the Oomukade pit."

      "Wait, what? Are you sure about that?"

      " Oomukade. Pit. NOW."

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    • Wait hold the fuck up

      Back to earlier. Aren’t the monsters citizens? Why are they in a pit with a grate over it?

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    • SmartProtagonist wrote:
      Wait hold the fuck up

      Back to earlier. Aren’t the monsters citizens? Why are they in a pit with a grate over it?

      They get paid to do it.

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    • SmartProtagonist wrote:
      Wait hold the fuck up

      Back to earlier. Aren’t the monsters citizens? Why are they in a pit with a grate over it?

      Who said anything about monsters being citizens? We know some mamono are traded as "sex slaves" (the ones managing the slave rings are mamono too, and to them this is more like a marriage agency...), that some are kept as pets or raised for their wool and milk...etc.

      This may be one of those kingdoms where mamono are considered dangerous beasts that need to be restrained...

      Repter wrote:

      SmartProtagonist wrote:
      Wait hold the fuck up

      Back to earlier. Aren’t the monsters citizens? Why are they in a pit with a grate over it?

      They get paid to do it.

      No need to pay them... a chance to get a dick is all the payment they need...

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    • They get paid for their time and the lucky ones get a husband in the end.

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    • Hellhound 

      Here is why. After my body gets completely recked by them, I'll unite them into an army. Once the week passes we lay and wait for the guard to let me out. After that happens me and my army storm the guard. Sweet freedom! We would then proceed to take the castle away from my sister and then toss her into the March Hare pit forever.

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    • Lord of Cats wrote: Hellhound 

      Here is why. After my body gets completely recked by them, I'll unite them into an army. Once the week passes we lay and wait for the guard to let me out. After that happens me and my army storm the guard. Sweet freedom! We would then proceed to take the castle away from my sister and then toss her into the March Hare pit forever.


      I'll just be borrowing your march hare sister for the ball, here, have some Rouladen.

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    • He writhes in his bods. "So this is how you usurp the thone! With" spits "mercy" his voice drips sarcasm.

      She loos down at him, "Call it what you will,you only get this chance."

      "Your incapable, the Dark Queen will devour us now. So...since madness is what you seek...let the March Hares let ad the way. I'll see you there when tney make you one of them."

      She grinned cruelly, put her Princess golden shoe on his shoulder and pushed him into the pit.

      "Enjoy!" She cried.

      Six months later in Wonderland she begged but by then her brother wa too far in love to notice her being turned.

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    • Wintermage wrote: He writhes in his bods. "So this is how you usurp the thone! With" spits "mercy" his voice drips sarcasm.

      She loos down at him, "Call it what you will,you only get this chance."

      "Your incapable, the Dark Queen will devour us now. So...since madness is what you seek...let the March Hares let ad the way. I'll see you there when tney make you one of them."

      She grinned cruelly, put her Princess golden shoe on his shoulder and pushed him into the pit.

      "Enjoy!" She cried.

      Six months later in Wonderland she begged but by then her brother wa too far in love to notice her being turned.

      He writhes in his bods. (I assume you meant "bonds")

      "So this is how you usurp the thone! With-" *spits* "-'mercy.'"

      She loos down at him, [[1]]

      "Your incapable, the dark queen. . ."

      (Your is possessive, you have stated that your sister owns something or is somehow connected directly to something which is referred to strictly as the dark queen, which is incapable of something which goes unsaid. However, the comma and sentence structure indicates that the spelling you're, which is a contraction of you-are, was intended instead.)


      Aside from those, sentence structure is pretty solid, but wonderland spreading to the normal world seems odd, also, what is she begging for, a couple rounds?

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    • Galeah: Good choice with a sound plan

      LorialetDreamer: Don't worry. Even if that's the case there's always that one that's single.

      Justheretowrite: Have fun with the centipedes!

      JOVA82: May as well go with who you perceive to be the lesser of the three evils.

      Memepunk: Never should have stolen that bread.

      Lord of Cats: Sounds like a plan, hope it doesn't go belly up. (Most plans involving Hellhounds never tend to work out well as an FYI.)

      Wintermage: Very nice.

      ChiangLu: Damn good story!

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    • Sorry, I was on my tablet with its tablet virtual keyboard.

      My editor was in bed and I had to get my ass to work.

      She kicked him into the pit with the March Hares and he went mad with lust.

      She was, as he predicted, unable to defend the kingdom against the monsters and was taken away /to/

      Wonderland. There she saw him and begged him to have them release her, but...

      By then he was far to in love.

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    • Note that this is for fun, its going to have faults. If I was going to publish...well that would be interesting. XD

      • hugs Justtheretowrite*
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    • I just find errors fascinating.

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    • Hellhound. I’m pretty sturdy, and at least that way I’m likely to keep my sanity.

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    • LakeTiger: Sturdy you say? That's what they all say!

      Anyway, neato on your answer!

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    • Choices so far:

      Oomukade: 7

      Hellhound: 6

      March Hare: 4

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    • Nice to see our bug girl is getting some love.

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    • Yeah, it is kinda surprising to me how few guys are going for the fluffy vanilla option...

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    • I'd have to go with the Hellhounds.

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    • Oomukade, because she doesn’t get enough love in anything other than WWYDs like this one. Wait that make me wonder, if anyone made a WWYD where you could choose between a hellhound and a mantanogo, would the mantanogo get more love then the hellhound?

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    • The Oomukade was my second choice.

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    • Matango gets like zero love here in the u.s.

      (Free will stuff)

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    • Matango barely gets love here anyway.

      Also you can buy a flamethrower as long as you don’t happen to live in California or Maryland, sooooooooooo...

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    • The only actual problem I have with her is the "Turn you into a Mushroom." Part. She also doesn't really look good enough to make the loss of free will at least have some reward.

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    • Yeah. An artwork update is needed.

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    • And a complete rewrite, culling some of the more questionable features.

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    • Agreed, they have lots of potential as shown wit the myconid.

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    • Yeah, I'd be all for marrying the Matango if not for the fact that it definitely has major flaws. Anyway, we have Myconid and the Mad Hatter, so why go back to her without major changes?

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    • What they do to men isn't the only reason I dislike them. There is also the fact that most Matangos were poor human girls who were infected and turned into Matangos, becoming unable to move on their own, and had their minds changed so they don't care.

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    • If only the Matango was like the Alraune and could move. Combine that with a rewrite and it might be a quality mushroom girl.

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    • I lean forward, looking my sister in the eye as I give my answer.

      "Yes."

      There is a pause.

      "What do I do?" Hisses my sister to the advisor at her side. The advisor scoffs, rolling his eyes.

      "Yes"

      "What?"

      "Yes."

      "I don't under-"

      "YES!"


      The door swings open, a nekomata skips in.

      "Yes?" She asks curiously.

      "Yes", replies the advisor. She looks to me.

      "Yes?"

      "Yes, duh"

      She skips over, gesturing for the chains by which I am bound.

      "Yes?" Asks the guard, brandishing the chain.

      "Yes" the nekomata agrees, taking the chains. She wastes no time dragging me out, scream whispering.

      "Yesyesyesyesyes!"

      "What was that?" My sister blurts.

      "He's going to the cat kingdom, where he will drown in cute cuddly kitten floof."

      "That wasn't an optio-"

      "Yes" interrupts her advisor, leaving

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    • March Hare Pit: Love rabbits and would prefer the fluffiness. Plus, while their lower body is covered by fluff, I'm sure their thighs and asses are just as plushy soft

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